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February 11th, 2015, 03:28 PM | #1 |
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Example footage from an Indian Wedding I filmed
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I shot my first week long Indian wedding at the end of last year. I took some bits and pieces from it and put it into a sample reel. (This is by no ways a finished edit, just an example of some of the footage) I would love some feedback as I continue to improve my skills for the future! =D Last edited by Travis Heberling; February 11th, 2015 at 03:54 PM. Reason: clearing up sometphing |
February 11th, 2015, 03:49 PM | #2 |
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Re: Example footage from an Indian Wedding I filmed
The images look nice but the music you used feels totally disconnected, I saw there was some live music playing around 00:35, could you have not used that? I have done a Turkish wedding last year and there was some traditional music played, nothing that was copyrighted so I could just use it for my trailer online or maybe you could buy some licensed Indian music?
What's absent now is the "mood", how it feels like to be on that wedding, I also see that speeches where recorded, that's something I missed as well as they can tell a story about the couple, are you planning on using this a trailer on your website? |
February 11th, 2015, 03:53 PM | #3 |
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Re: Example footage from an Indian Wedding I filmed
Maybe I didnt specify enough that this isnt a final edit, just a collection of some of the footage =)
Still waiting on a few things from the couple so no finished edit yet. |
February 11th, 2015, 04:08 PM | #4 |
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ah ok, don't mind me then :)
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February 11th, 2015, 04:11 PM | #5 |
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Re: Example footage from an Indian Wedding I filmed
You wanted feedback: To me the music and the video had no relationship. 1. You are using western music for an Indian event. 2. I want to hear the natural sound of alot of your shots. 3. The video looked fine.
Good luck with it. James
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I thought the song used was fine. Sounds like a bollywood instrumental ... may be overlay the sounds of the dhol players and people making noise/dancing over the instrumental as well? You will obviously be creating a lengthy video as well as the highlights considering the amount of footage captured over the week so a mix of everything will always go down nicely with the couple and their family. |
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February 15th, 2015, 02:31 PM | #7 |
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Re: Example footage from an Indian Wedding I filmed
Hi Travis, given that it's not an edit as such, but a collection of raw footage, it's tricky to give any meaningful feedback! What sorts of things are you interested in comments on?
I suppose two very minor things I noticed (that no bride is going to notice) are: during the ritual where they daub the groom with paint, it looks like two different makes of cameras were used (or, at any rate, different settings) -- colours of the wider angle and sharpness seem different to the close-up. During dancing later on, looks like there's some handheld shake there. |
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