Love Story Intro Critique

Leo Zheng · February 24th, 2005, 03:06 PM

I would suggest more transitions. Cross dissolve is fine, or any other depending on the mood and pace. Also the fade-in, fade-out takes a little bit too long.

Will Abele · February 24th, 2005, 05:42 PM

I liked it. I agree about changing scenes to the beat of the music. It was a little shaky, but Brian's criticism was very much exaggerated.

Ben Lynn · February 24th, 2005, 08:47 PM

Just an update.

I appreciate the feedback.

I'm currently re-cutting it to the beats and making some small changes to the shot order and shot selection. Thanks again.

Ben

February 24th, 2005, 03:06 PM	#16
Leo Zheng Regular Crew Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: College Park, MD Posts: 34	I would suggest more transitions. Cross dissolve is fine, or any other depending on the mood and pace. Also the fade-in, fade-out takes a little bit too long. __________________ Leo

February 24th, 2005, 05:42 PM	#17
Will Abele Regular Crew Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 26	I liked it. I agree about changing scenes to the beat of the music. It was a little shaky, but Brian's criticism was very much exaggerated.

February 24th, 2005, 08:47 PM	#18
Ben Lynn Major Player Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Bloomington, IL Posts: 636	Just an update. I appreciate the feedback. I'm currently re-cutting it to the beats and making some small changes to the shot order and shot selection. Thanks again. Ben