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October 28th, 2010, 09:02 PM | #2 |
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Hi there,
I notice that some of you checked this video and did not have anything to say. I did not upload this video to showoff but to learn good and bad points of this movie. Your input will mean allot.
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October 28th, 2010, 11:24 PM | #3 |
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The Good: Imagery, location, camera work, camera moves, choice of music.
The Bad: Could not tell where voices were coming from, but I personally did not like the narration at the beginning from the male voice, and the female (preacher voice ?) near the end was also very jarring and harsh. I know, its a trailer, but I also think the lettering near the beginning is not needed to give the feel to this trailer.
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October 31st, 2010, 01:47 PM | #4 |
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I liked your video it was shot and edited very well and the background music was a good choice. I also agree with Chris that the narration has to be looked at. Well done. Stelios
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October 31st, 2010, 07:50 PM | #5 |
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Thank you guys for taking the time.
Is the narration content was kinda off or the narration voice? I do agree about the text in the beginning, I think I should left it without it.
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November 2nd, 2010, 09:56 PM | #6 |
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The narration reminded me too much of the new Lexus commercials on tv now. Your imagery was great! I don't think it needed words.
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November 3rd, 2010, 04:50 AM | #7 |
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Hi Dror. I actually like the voice narrative, although since it's there, I'd prefer it to tell a story from beginning to end of the video. Other than that, the imagery was very good, only thing I'd say about the editing is that I didn't particularly like the fast "fades to white" at the first part. Maybe some brightness-contrast combination effect would work better. A personal opinion. :)
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