Hey Jawad,
I liked it, though there were a couple of things I'd tighten up. For example, the music comes down to an awfully low volume when you include the real time audio. Secondly, the edit could be a little tighter by cutting out things like camera shake, and focus hunting. In fact, there was quite a bit of obviously handheld footage here. I would recommend investing in a good monopod to stay still while remaining mobile. I know I couldn't get through a wedding day without one.
Another thing you could have done is cut down the length of the song which would let you shorten the shots and cut some shake. The song is pushing 5 minutes which is an awfully long length for a SDE.
But on the whole, I enjoyed it. I always like Liuna Station. Shot my first paid wedding there :)
|