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May 30th, 2010, 08:05 PM
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Aaron...
You had a great feeling throughout this video. I think the biggest thing that I caught was some focus issues. I loved your shot compositions. Your camera handle the receptions dance lights very well, in turn it gave you some great looking party footage. Good job! Steve |
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May 30th, 2010, 11:19 PM
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Hi Aaron.
I think you have a lot of good potential. I think a lot of your shots look too messy i.e. (focus issue, shaky, color issue etc) However, I see some nice moments and some great storytelling effort in there. So I think you need to improve the way you shoot in terms of composition, stability, color, audio, etc etc and keep on polishing your storytelling mindset. Thanks for sharing
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June 1st, 2010, 11:31 AM
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Thanks for the feedback! :)
I will definitely take your suggestions to heart. Like I mentioned, this was our first opportunity to use the glidecam and I obviously need a bit more practice with it. As far as "composition, stability, color, audio, etc etc", were there any specific clips that come to mind that need work/attention to more than others? Thanks again!
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00:32: very shaky shot of the shoe. not sure if thats glidecam or not, but I wouldn't really put that footage in. same goes with all the glidecam shots, but I guess you can't help it :) but I do like the dance party glidecam shots, its rather shaky but full of energy and happiness. goes well with the song. 02:03 the bride doesn't have a very pleasant teeth, I would cut right before you close up on her profile and lots and lots of focus issue. Like I said before, I think you have great storytelling potential. keep it up :) Santo
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