Martin...
You should be happy with this as a first... I think you have some pretty good shots of the day. It's a little slow paced at times and a little long for the average viewer. For the B&G it's probably perfect. If you plan on using this as a future demo though I would recommend shortening the length of the video to around 2 minutes. You would have a lot of great shots to work with. I would also get rid of the text in the first 20 seconds...
All in all, you did a decent job capturing the couples moments together. I'm sure they like what you have put together for them.
Steve
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