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May 14th, 2009, 05:18 AM | #2 |
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a beautiful piece with a great choice of music. Loved the opening scene which caught my eye. A great mix of gliding and static shots. Would've loved some underlying audio during the throwing up of the groom and perhaps other parts - I felt that was the only thing missing. A couple of minor things: 1.07 the transition seemed long which made the cross-over feel a bit uneasy 2.42 the cut from one scene to a similiar scene could possibly have been broken up with a different shot Great work and loved the feel. What adaptor are you using? Cheers |
May 14th, 2009, 07:12 PM | #3 |
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Thanks for the feedback Dean
I might have another go at the transition at 1:07 it does feel a bit arkward. I agree on the other comment, I was trying for a bit of a cut shot but didn't really work. I wanted more audio but struggled to fit it in, will definately have another look though. I'm not actually using an adapter, that is straight from xha1, with a bit of colour work in post.
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May 14th, 2009, 07:47 PM | #4 |
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Hey Darren,
Nice job - tight edit. Nice pacing, great choice of music and nice feel overall. The stabilised footage and opening shot worked really well too. Jewish weddings I always find really challenging getting a decent angle during the ceremony but you did well. Nothing major, but a couple of very small nitpicky things... at 2:50 the whites are blown out in the guys shirt at 3:50 looks like it may have been on auto and the focus changes from the couple to the trees in the background I did a 'double take' with the rabbi then realised I've shot 2-3 weddings with him previously. Keep up the good work! Cheers, Matt. P.S. Where's the breaking of the glass shot? - small *not so funny* joke there... |
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Very funny....$#%^$#@ photographer ! was in so many shots could hardly not be intentional. Anyway the focus thing was my attempt at shift focus to create a bit of DOF. I see what you mean about the shirts, but they are not really the focus so thought could get away with it. Thanks for the feedback Matt really appreciate it.:)
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