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May 13th, 2009, 06:32 PM | #2 |
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Indeed, lots of beautiful footage, smooth shooting and good pacing. Only a few instances of exposure that could be better (some face shots were a bit dark), but otherwise, I think you're headed for success!
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I watched it again to see if there was anything I felt I could comment on - nope, I'd be thrilled if I produced something like that - you should be too. |
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May 14th, 2009, 08:58 AM | #4 |
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That was great!
I envy your slow moving smooth pilot shots....... I'm using merlin so its so hard to get a slow moving shot. I think you need to do some coloring there. I think it will make a great deal of difference. And the cut could probably be faster in some instances. But that's probably just me.. :) Santo
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I agree with you. The shadows on a lot of the faces lack a consistency. I'm not quite sure how to remedy that since it's an event with changing light conditions. If anyone has ideas PLEASE share. I would love to know. I do try to color correct the skin tones to match each other, and believe you me, it's a daunting task. |
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Your comments are very flattering and it humbles me to know that others are enjoying watching the video. I'm always looking to improve and I enjoy listening to peoples input, especially those I respect. Anthony |
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The steadicam shots were taken by my friend Josh and I manned the Brevis. We also have a Merlin, and it's no where near as stable as the Pilot. But the Merlin is great in tight spots and the only people who notice not so good steadicam work are steadicam peepers like myself. :) Anthony |
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Well, Anthony, you know how I feel about this clip... I know the backstory and it being your first solo project is really something else. I'm so glad I've inspired you and I'm thrilled to see this kind of polish in your stuff. Keep up the awesome work and I look forward to shooting with you again soon.
Best, -K
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July 29th, 2009, 05:25 PM | #9 |
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Very nice, went together pretty smoothly, over all. What's the song?
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July 29th, 2009, 07:04 PM | #10 |
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That was excellent.. very well done! Good job; look forward to seeing more.
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August 3rd, 2009, 09:01 AM | #11 |
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hey anthony,
i think your off to a great start. you had some good compositions, some great moments, and some nice solid move and ideas in there. i think color would be huge for this but i wouldn't get caught up in trying to 'grade' the piece and be really dramatic. at this point, i think some basic three way color correcter to properly white balance and expose each image would go a long way in making the piece more cohesive. a lot of your shots felt very cool but the imagery suggested they should be warm - as an example. the other thing would be the use of slow motion. i would ask yourself why your using it so much, what is it adding, and is it better to show some of those shots in 5 seconds (slow motion) vs the same thing in 2 seconds at regular speed. you have one song to get something powerful across, make sure that you don't waste a single frame. slow motion has it's place, but when overused it can certainly do much more harm i feel. thanks for sharing. P.
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Dang you are good !! keep it up...
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August 3rd, 2009, 07:09 PM | #13 |
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Good job Anthony - very nice work!
You've got some good constructive feedback above so not much more to add. My fave cut was the lens flare timed with the track crescendo at 3:18! Cheers, Matt. |
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Anthony, woow that was nicely put together. I like all your steadicam shots. Very good job mixing with the music too.
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August 4th, 2009, 09:40 AM | #15 |
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Nice clip. I enjoyed it all the way through. It's definitely a good base for a future career, not doubt about that.
As others have mentioned, proper exposure and maybe a bit of color grading would be a plus. The slow motion did seem out of place in some few shots but seem to have worked in others. I'm not sure if it was my connection but the slow motion seem very jerky. The other aspect i wanted to mention was the audio. When i first started i was always tempted to leave the ambient audio out, to make it look more like a music video, but adding it to the existing music sometime bring the emotions out for viewers to relive the moment. Try it on your next SDE, and see the crowd reaction. You'll be amazed Thanks for sharing. |
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