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Originally Posted by Brendan Marnell
Just script it "Mozart has been driven out of the tribe for breeding" and omit any addition of "One can't help feeling sorry for Mozart" or "She will be feeling isolated and is trying desperately to rejoin". I'd accept that. If that's what you mean then what you're implying is ... the script should stick to objective observation and leave out subjective follow through.
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Yes, or at least tone down the subjective commentary to slightly less blatant levels. As Mark says the current version does get your attention, but does it leave people thinking of Meerkats as Meerkats or as little furry people? I'd like to have a little left to the imagination here, with more emphasis on the fact that these are animals and not people.