My first 30sec ad--looking for feedback at DVinfo.net

Scott Brickert · February 18th, 2008, 10:03 AM

Hey Y'all,
here's a thirty sec clip that might work for a TV spot or placement on a website. It's supposed to engender 'longing for summer' or something similar.

Let me know what your reactions are, especially camera work, pacing, music bed, color, anything else.

you can see the HD version here: http://www.vimeo.com/702420 Clicking on "FULL" brings up the HD, otherwise is downscaled SD.

John M. McCloskey · February 18th, 2008, 11:37 AM

For what it is looks fine, steady footage, colors match, music leads to either a relaxing theme or adventurous theme. I would probably put a rack focus on the flowers rather than a pull zoom. Good luck.

February 18th, 2008, 11:37 AM	#2
John M. McCloskey Major Player Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: West Point, MS Posts: 313	For what it is looks fine, steady footage, colors match, music leads to either a relaxing theme or adventurous theme. I would probably put a rack focus on the flowers rather than a pull zoom. Good luck.