not really xl1 topic but something i wrote out of boredome at DVinfo.net

Bryan Johannes Onel · October 20th, 2002, 09:43 AM

Hey there folks,
This is something i wrote during schooltime when i got bore (oh oh :-P ). Well here it is, please let me know what you think about it (for the not so bright people out here (J/K) its about death) :

Years to infity
By Bryan Johannes Onel

INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY

There are some close-up macro shots of objects of value
from peter. Peter, about 75, grey costume, grey hair.

PETER (V.O.)
The pen i used to write with, i
used to write her letters
everyday with this pen, but now
it will be forgotten, lost.

Peter walks up to his window and looks outside, we see a
large crowd of people moving around.

PETER (V.O.)
Look at them, a swarm of people
hurrying around with no real
purpose.

Peter turns around and looks at his books in his shelve.

PETER (V.O.)
The books i learned from, these
books helped me be the man i am
today, i loved these books, i
cherished them, soon their
meaning will be lost too. All
gone. It's a shame.

Peter sits down on his large fluffy antique chair and turns
on his TV, we see chaotic images flashing by on cnn with an
incredible speed.

PETER (V.O.)
All that chaos in the world.
Exactly the same will keep
happening over and over again. We
live and we die, and every
generation has to endure the
brute forces of life and the
cycle of life keeps going on.

Peter stands up and walks up to his bed he sits on it.

PETER (V.O.)
I can't complain, i led a good
life, and I'm thankful for every
single moment of it.

He lays down in his bed.

PETER (V.O.)
Now years become months, months
become weeks, weeks become days,
days become hours, hours become
minutes, minutes become seconds
and seconds become infinity. Lets
keep the light on tonight.

Peter then falls asleep.

FADE TO BLACK.

Rob Lohman · October 21st, 2002, 10:57 AM

Hey, nice one Bryan! And good to see you at IBC. Work is really
killing me at the moment so not much time to talk with you and
stuff. Will get back later though.

Dylan Couper · October 21st, 2002, 04:23 PM

Looks good! Are you planning on shooting it?

Bryan Johannes Onel · October 22nd, 2002, 02:23 AM

I'm not really planning on shooting it.
Why do you ask? You wanna shoot it? :-P

Let me know.

Bryan

Dylan Couper · October 22nd, 2002, 06:14 PM

Nope. Just wonderin'. :)

October 20th, 2002, 09:43 AM	#1
Bryan Johannes Onel Regular Crew Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Amsterdam, The netherlands Posts: 71	not really xl1 topic but something i wrote out of boredome Hey there folks, This is something i wrote during schooltime when i got bore (oh oh :-P ). Well here it is, please let me know what you think about it (for the not so bright people out here (J/K) its about death) : Years to infity By Bryan Johannes Onel INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY There are some close-up macro shots of objects of value from peter. Peter, about 75, grey costume, grey hair. PETER (V.O.) The pen i used to write with, i used to write her letters everyday with this pen, but now it will be forgotten, lost. Peter walks up to his window and looks outside, we see a large crowd of people moving around. PETER (V.O.) Look at them, a swarm of people hurrying around with no real purpose. Peter turns around and looks at his books in his shelve. PETER (V.O.) The books i learned from, these books helped me be the man i am today, i loved these books, i cherished them, soon their meaning will be lost too. All gone. It's a shame. Peter sits down on his large fluffy antique chair and turns on his TV, we see chaotic images flashing by on cnn with an incredible speed. PETER (V.O.) All that chaos in the world. Exactly the same will keep happening over and over again. We live and we die, and every generation has to endure the brute forces of life and the cycle of life keeps going on. Peter stands up and walks up to his bed he sits on it. PETER (V.O.) I can't complain, i led a good life, and I'm thankful for every single moment of it. He lays down in his bed. PETER (V.O.) Now years become months, months become weeks, weeks become days, days become hours, hours become minutes, minutes become seconds and seconds become infinity. Lets keep the light on tonight. Peter then falls asleep. FADE TO BLACK.

October 21st, 2002, 10:57 AM	#2
Rob Lohman RED Code Chef Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: Holland Posts: 12,514	Hey, nice one Bryan! And good to see you at IBC. Work is really killing me at the moment so not much time to talk with you and stuff. Will get back later though. __________________ Rob Lohman, visuar@iname.com DV Info Wrangler & RED Code Chef Join the DV Challenge \| Lady X Search DVinfo.net for quick answers \| Buy from the best: DVinfo.net sponsors

October 22nd, 2002, 02:23 AM	#4
Bryan Johannes Onel Regular Crew Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Amsterdam, The netherlands Posts: 71	not planning to.... I'm not really planning on shooting it. Why do you ask? You wanna shoot it? :-P Let me know. Bryan

October 21st, 2002, 04:23 PM	#3
Dylan Couper Wrangler Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: Vancouver, British Columbia Posts: 8,314	Looks good! Are you planning on shooting it?

October 22nd, 2002, 06:14 PM	#5
Dylan Couper Wrangler Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: Vancouver, British Columbia Posts: 8,314	Nope. Just wonderin'. :)