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May 11th, 2008, 03:05 AM
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Spring Sunset (ex1+letus) - Happy with this one!
Hey guys. Just uploaded a new clip.
Really happy with the results on this one so I'd really like comments on how to improve even more or what you would have done differently! Thanks www.oyvindstokkan.no for flash and download version |
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May 18th, 2008, 04:00 PM
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Again guys. Critics on this one will be greatly appreciated.
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May 18th, 2008, 04:24 PM
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Nice work. Really smooth pans and tilts. I liked the rotating shots (maybe slightly over used). The small waterfall really caught my eye as well and the rain drops on the pine tree. The shift to the ax and campfire scene did not work for me and kind of disrupted the relaxing mood. Would like to see closer/macro shots of the flowers and running water which always fasinates me. The entire piece could probably be shortened just a bit only using your very best scenes.
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May 18th, 2008, 05:10 PM
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You tend to over use backlight. While one maybe two shots with the lens flare would have been ok, not the whole video.
For instance the shot of the waterfall at 1.50 is probably the most compelling of all your imagery
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