Clip from my new movie "Junipero" at DVinfo.net

Marlon Torres · August 28th, 2006, 11:20 AM

http://www.citizencine.com/films/jun...arkgardens.mov

comments & suggestions welcome!

Michael Chu · August 28th, 2006, 09:30 PM

time passing, the traveler enters the forrest, cross fades to pine needles/trees and black void in the background - at that moment, i thought, it was possible that a good amount of time had passed and it became night. It also takes a good amount of the screen realty, put something there and use your cinematography and post production skills to make it look great!

Michael Chu · August 28th, 2006, 09:34 PM

i want to get a discussion going...
http://www.dvinfo.net/conf/showthread.php?t=74362

Jeff Cottrone · August 28th, 2006, 10:33 PM

Marlon, this is well done. The lighting, the sound, the dialogue, tone, acting....all great stuff. I didn't necessarily resonate with the actual story, but I don't particularly like this genre. Just wanted to say it looks and sounds great. Impressive.

Mike Horrigan · August 29th, 2006, 01:56 PM

WOW! Great clip! Is this a full length feature?
What kind of budget/crew are you working with?

The film looks amazing, great sound, nice shots, excellent lighting, and an interesting story.

When will it be finished?

Mike

Marlon Torres · August 29th, 2006, 05:51 PM

thanks for the feedback guys

Marlon Torres · August 29th, 2006, 05:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mike Horrigan

WOW! Great clip! Is this a full length feature?
What kind of budget/crew are you working with?

The film looks amazing, great sound, nice shots, excellent lighting, and an interesting story.

When will it be finished?

Mike

thanks for the feedback...no budget really, spent 80 bux on the costume i guess...all the equipment i bought from my previous student film...does that count too? :) it should be done in a month! as for the crew... we never had more than 4 people at a time... the actors would sometimes fill in as crew....very basic, actors, me, and a sound recorder

Mike Horrigan · August 29th, 2006, 05:58 PM

Very nice, how did you do the flies on the creepy corpse?

Will it be a feature or a short? Great sound recording BTW.

Kenny Emeson · August 29th, 2006, 08:38 PM

What camera did you shoot with?

Marlon Torres · August 29th, 2006, 09:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mike Horrigan

Very nice, how did you do the flies on the creepy corpse?

Will it be a feature or a short? Great sound recording BTW.

Well, while I'm a majoring in cinema, i also have a minor in animation...so i have soem background in 2d and 3d animation...these flies were animated in after effects. they are just very tiny black photoshop dots, but the animation sells it i guess. the final movie will be around 30 - 35 minutes

Marlon Torres · August 29th, 2006, 09:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kenny Emeson

What camera did you shoot with?

I used a Canon XL2 with stock 20x lens.

Shaughan Flynn · August 29th, 2006, 10:44 PM

Very nice! My only crit is the devils exposition about the status of human kind. Much better to use a visual to convey that IMHO :)

Dave Ferdinand · August 30th, 2006, 12:43 AM

I liked the start a lot with the skull and effects but then the pace slowed down quite a bit and the overly light-blueish night 4 day thingy didn't really work for me.

I wish we had more info on what was going on..

August 28th, 2006, 11:20 AM	#1
Marlon Torres Major Player Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 230	Clip from my new movie "Junipero" http://www.citizencine.com/films/jun...arkgardens.mov comments & suggestions welcome!

August 28th, 2006, 09:30 PM	#2
Michael Chu New Boot Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Atlanta, Georgia Posts: 16	something i saw... time passing, the traveler enters the forrest, cross fades to pine needles/trees and black void in the background - at that moment, i thought, it was possible that a good amount of time had passed and it became night. It also takes a good amount of the screen realty, put something there and use your cinematography and post production skills to make it look great!

August 28th, 2006, 09:34 PM	#3
Michael Chu New Boot Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Atlanta, Georgia Posts: 16	return the favor i want to get a discussion going... http://www.dvinfo.net/conf/showthread.php?t=74362

August 29th, 2006, 10:44 PM	#12
Shaughan Flynn Major Player Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 272	Very nice! My only crit is the devils exposition about the status of human kind. Much better to use a visual to convey that IMHO :) __________________ B-Scene Films

August 30th, 2006, 12:43 AM	#13
Dave Ferdinand Major Player Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Vancouver, BC Posts: 359	I liked the start a lot with the skull and effects but then the pace slowed down quite a bit and the overly light-blueish night 4 day thingy didn't really work for me. I wish we had more info on what was going on.. __________________ Do or do not, there is no try.

August 28th, 2006, 10:33 PM	#4
Jeff Cottrone Regular Crew Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Rochester, NY Posts: 100	Marlon, this is well done. The lighting, the sound, the dialogue, tone, acting....all great stuff. I didn't necessarily resonate with the actual story, but I don't particularly like this genre. Just wanted to say it looks and sounds great. Impressive.

August 29th, 2006, 01:56 PM	#5
Mike Horrigan Major Player Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Ottawa Canada Posts: 755	WOW! Great clip! Is this a full length feature? What kind of budget/crew are you working with? The film looks amazing, great sound, nice shots, excellent lighting, and an interesting story. When will it be finished? Mike

August 29th, 2006, 05:51 PM	#6
Marlon Torres Major Player Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 230	thanks for the feedback guys

August 29th, 2006, 05:58 PM	#8
Mike Horrigan Major Player Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Ottawa Canada Posts: 755	Very nice, how did you do the flies on the creepy corpse? Will it be a feature or a short? Great sound recording BTW.

August 29th, 2006, 08:38 PM	#9
Kenny Emeson New Boot Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Baltimore, MD Posts: 17	What camera did you shoot with?