Show Your Work 2003

Federico Dib · September 29th, 2003, 07:12 PM

This is just my very "subjective" opinion...

THe images are gorgeous.. I would correct the colors to enhance the green and the blue... but that´s me... I´m not a scenery fan, but there are really beatiull shots... and I think that could be "tricked" to look "brighter in colors"...

I would also definetely try and make a shorter.. more compressed or whatever... version for download... For those with slow speed connections... (like me)

I only got to watch up to minute 3'25 or so... I´m in a "supposed" 256kb dsl line.. and still was very slow so I killed the download.... maybe it´s just my connection tonite?? (most likely)... Still, imagine those with dial up...

I would also change the color of the initial credit, from red to something softer.. more in the mood of the music and the shots... Green?...

Can´t comment any further because didn´t got to see the whole thing... sorry.

George Brackett III · September 30th, 2003, 04:01 AM

Thanks Federico....I'll have to make a lot lower resolution file. Of course, the " beaytiful scenery" won't be as beautiful....

George Brackett III · September 30th, 2003, 04:30 AM

I posted a lot smaller file on my site....sorry about the last one...

http://www.crimsonbutterfly.com/video/gorges2.wmv

John Heskett · September 30th, 2003, 02:53 PM

Do you live is such a nice place? A lot of potential for great footage in a place like that.

I have only been doing this sort of thing for a short while, so my experience is limited.
Some of the old and crustiest may be able to give you better advice.

But here is my go at it:
The colors are a little dull. I use an enhancing filter from Tiffen. It really seems to make the colors pop out on footage like that.

I see you have some of the same problems I do, making smoooooth pan and tilts. This is a difficult skill that takes some time to acquire. On scenic footage it is usually better to get still footage, at least 30 seconds at a time. Then if you want to practice the pan and tilt, go ahead, you already have the still footage. Get at least as much still footage from a tripod as moving footage and may be even more. You can always add some movement in postproduction.

Nice Scenic shots.

Christopher Go · September 30th, 2003, 03:45 PM

Hey Mark, that's funny, I just posted about this too in the Open DV forum under the new Panasonic cam. Are you thinking of entering?

Mark Newhouse · September 30th, 2003, 03:55 PM

Me!? No, I won't be entering. I'm still too new at this. But I was hoping that maybe some people from the boards here might enter, and even score one of the grants. There's a lot of talent represented here, and I'd love to see some of it rewarded in this way.

But who knows, maybe if they keep the grant around long enough I'll have something worth entering in a year or two...

George Brackett III · September 30th, 2003, 07:29 PM

I know now that you're exactly right. I'll always try to carry some kind of tripod with me when I do landscape-type footage. Of course, it was over 90 that day, and we walked at least 10 miles to get all the shots...first week in July....

Corey MacGregor · October 5th, 2003, 03:12 PM

I was wondering if anybody can give me some criticism on my new demo reel. I shot everything in it with my GL2, edited in FCP3 and did graphics and color correction in After Effects. Thanks!

http://www.terraform.tv/

Jacko Bultinck · October 5th, 2003, 03:27 PM

very flashy, nice artwork, clear images, speed and hardrock, yezzzz......

well done
I love it
jacko

Rob Lohman · October 5th, 2003, 03:28 PM

Do you have a direct download link please?

Corey MacGregor · October 5th, 2003, 03:44 PM

here's a direct link to the movie:

http://www.terraform.tv/videogallery/video/demo.mov

Rob Lohman · October 5th, 2003, 04:15 PM

That's looky pretty nice! Those skateboarding scenes might
look a bit nicer with some good slowmotion (not too much)??

Other then that it looked nice!

Andreas Fernbrant · October 6th, 2003, 09:47 PM

Hello friends.
I'd like to have some opinions about a teaser I made for
a upcoming DVD.

Comments, thoughts or "what ever" are most welcome.
I know this might not be your personal interest, but I'd like
to know how you recive it. Did you get interested in the DVD
and so on?

Mac version:http://www.fernbrant.com/saltomortalez%20-%20teaser.mov
PC version: http://www.fernbrant.com/saltomortalez%20-%20teaser.wmv
Bigger Mac/PC: http://www.fernbrant.com/saltomortalez%20-%20teaser.mpg

/Andreas

Michael Wisniewski · October 7th, 2003, 12:47 AM

Hi Andreas, here's my initial impressions of the teaser before going to your website:

Overall very nice and smooth and it drew me in. It made me want to find out more about what those guys are doing. My impression is that this is a sport video for gymnasts, but I wasn't positive - it made me wonder if this might also be a documentary.

Notes:
Your branding was way too subtle for me:

- I kept wondering what the name of the DVD was if I wanted to look it up? It's not clear from the teaser.

- The website did not stick in my head during the 1st and 2nd viewings because I was busy watching the action.

- I missed the branding/info at the end because your jazzy music, which drew me in, stopped, and I thought the video was over. I only saw the ending credits the third time around because I was busy doing something else and let it play through.

- Personally I'd move the Atashami logo. Maybe to the very, very beginning or end of the teaser, or overlay it onto the opening tage line sequence so it's associated with your tag line. The reason is that the beginning sequences: WARNING, tag line, and guy on the beach all drew me toward the subject of the video but the Atashami logo is just eye candy it doesn't have anything to do with the subject of the video and feels out of place.

Once again though, very nicely done.

October 8th, 2003, 08:02 PM

No... I'm not being naughty or trying to get anyone's hackles up. "Get Goosed!" despite what it may sound like, is the title of my family, feature film that premiered two weeks ago here in Colorado. It's about an elderly Native American man and his best friend, a Canada goose. The old man lives in a rest home and has pretty much given up on life until he meets the goose. The spark of life returns... he checks out of the rest home and buys a ranch, which he intends to share with his new friend. But a federal bureaucrat has different ideas and tries to confiscate the goose. In the end, the people of the old man's mountain community rally to his support... the bureaucrat gets goosed, and the old man rekindles his relationship with his son and granddaughter.

We had two scheduled performances. Both sold out, and we did a carry-over the following day (the house seats 350). We sold 180 VHS tapes and 80 DVDs at the premiere.

Two cable networks and two distributors are now talking with our Executive Producer. Things might happen.

Which is good, because I worked on it for three years... during which our human star suffered a stroke that nearly killed him (21 days into a 28 day schedule), and a malfeasant teenager killed our goose star. I also spent a lot of money learning some lessons the hard way about some editors' integrity. Everyone on the film, except me, has been paid (I wrote it, directed it and wound up finishing the editing). I'm ready for a paycheck. Top Ramen is really starting to suck.

I mention all this because the film is a hybrid. Most of it was shot on 16mm film; but about 1/3 (scenic and wildlife shots) of it was done with a Canon XL-1s in the frame movie mode with a 1/2 black promist filter. Except for one interior that wasn't lit well, I defy anyone to tell the difference. I'm really impressed with that little camera and what it can do... so was my son-in-law, whose father just happens to own Foto-Kem in Burbank. Michael (my son-in-law) said Foto-Kem is building a new facility just to do digital fimmaking postproduction.

I'm not saying film is dead. But as far as I'm concerned, it sure has been kicked in the...

September 29th, 2003, 07:12 PM	#511
Federico Dib Major Player Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Barcelona Posts: 312	This is just my very "subjective" opinion... THe images are gorgeous.. I would correct the colors to enhance the green and the blue... but that´s me... I´m not a scenery fan, but there are really beatiull shots... and I think that could be "tricked" to look "brighter in colors"... I would also definetely try and make a shorter.. more compressed or whatever... version for download... For those with slow speed connections... (like me) I only got to watch up to minute 3'25 or so... I´m in a "supposed" 256kb dsl line.. and still was very slow so I killed the download.... maybe it´s just my connection tonite?? (most likely)... Still, imagine those with dial up... I would also change the color of the initial credit, from red to something softer.. more in the mood of the music and the shots... Green?... Can´t comment any further because didn´t got to see the whole thing... sorry. __________________ Messenger Boy : The Thessalonian you're fighting, he's the biggest man I've ever seen. I wouldn't want to fight him. Achilles : That is why no one will remember your name.

September 30th, 2003, 04:30 AM	#513
George Brackett III Regular Crew Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Waterville, NY USA Posts: 83	I posted a lot smaller file on my site....sorry about the last one... http://www.crimsonbutterfly.com/video/gorges2.wmv __________________ If the quality of mercy is not strained, then how do they get the lumps out?

September 30th, 2003, 02:53 PM	#514
John Heskett Regular Crew Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Terre Haute Indiana Posts: 181	Do you live is such a nice place? A lot of potential for great footage in a place like that. I have only been doing this sort of thing for a short while, so my experience is limited. Some of the old and crustiest may be able to give you better advice. But here is my go at it: The colors are a little dull. I use an enhancing filter from Tiffen. It really seems to make the colors pop out on footage like that. I see you have some of the same problems I do, making smoooooth pan and tilts. This is a difficult skill that takes some time to acquire. On scenic footage it is usually better to get still footage, at least 30 seconds at a time. Then if you want to practice the pan and tilt, go ahead, you already have the still footage. Get at least as much still footage from a tripod as moving footage and may be even more. You can always add some movement in postproduction. Nice Scenic shots. __________________ Illuminate the Vision

September 30th, 2003, 03:55 PM	#516
Mark Newhouse Regular Crew Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Tucson, AZ Posts: 63	Me!? No, I won't be entering. I'm still too new at this. But I was hoping that maybe some people from the boards here might enter, and even score one of the grants. There's a lot of talent represented here, and I'd love to see some of it rewarded in this way. But who knows, maybe if they keep the grant around long enough I'll have something worth entering in a year or two... __________________ --Mark

September 30th, 2003, 07:29 PM	#517
George Brackett III Regular Crew Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Waterville, NY USA Posts: 83	I know now that you're exactly right. I'll always try to carry some kind of tripod with me when I do landscape-type footage. Of course, it was over 90 that day, and we walked at least 10 miles to get all the shots...first week in July.... __________________ If the quality of mercy is not strained, then how do they get the lumps out?

September 30th, 2003, 04:01 AM	#512
George Brackett III Regular Crew Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Waterville, NY USA Posts: 83	Thanks Federico....I'll have to make a lot lower resolution file. Of course, the " beaytiful scenery" won't be as beautiful....

September 30th, 2003, 03:45 PM	#515
Christopher Go Major Player Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Honolulu, HI Posts: 429	Hey Mark, that's funny, I just posted about this too in the Open DV forum under the new Panasonic cam. Are you thinking of entering?

October 5th, 2003, 03:12 PM	#518
Corey MacGregor Regular Crew Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Vancouver Posts: 74	Check out my first demo reel I was wondering if anybody can give me some criticism on my new demo reel. I shot everything in it with my GL2, edited in FCP3 and did graphics and color correction in After Effects. Thanks! http://www.terraform.tv/

October 5th, 2003, 03:27 PM	#519
Jacko Bultinck Regular Crew Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: belgium Posts: 30	very flashy, nice artwork, clear images, speed and hardrock, yezzzz...... well done I love it jacko __________________ http://www.waxworld.be

October 5th, 2003, 03:28 PM	#520
Rob Lohman RED Code Chef Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: Holland Posts: 12,514	Do you have a direct download link please? __________________ Rob Lohman, visuar@iname.com DV Info Wrangler & RED Code Chef Join the DV Challenge \| Lady X Search DVinfo.net for quick answers \| Buy from the best: DVinfo.net sponsors

October 5th, 2003, 03:44 PM	#521
Corey MacGregor Regular Crew Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Vancouver Posts: 74	here's a direct link to the movie: http://www.terraform.tv/videogallery/video/demo.mov

October 5th, 2003, 04:15 PM	#522
Rob Lohman RED Code Chef Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: Holland Posts: 12,514	That's looky pretty nice! Those skateboarding scenes might look a bit nicer with some good slowmotion (not too much)?? Other then that it looked nice! __________________ Rob Lohman, visuar@iname.com DV Info Wrangler & RED Code Chef Join the DV Challenge \| Lady X Search DVinfo.net for quick answers \| Buy from the best: DVinfo.net sponsors

October 6th, 2003, 09:47 PM	#523
Andreas Fernbrant Major Player Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Sweden - Helsingborg Posts: 283	Teaser? OK or Bad? Hello friends. I'd like to have some opinions about a teaser I made for a upcoming DVD. Comments, thoughts or "what ever" are most welcome. I know this might not be your personal interest, but I'd like to know how you recive it. Did you get interested in the DVD and so on? Mac version:http://www.fernbrant.com/saltomortalez%20-%20teaser.mov PC version: http://www.fernbrant.com/saltomortalez%20-%20teaser.wmv Bigger Mac/PC: http://www.fernbrant.com/saltomortalez%20-%20teaser.mpg /Andreas

October 7th, 2003, 12:47 AM	#524
Michael Wisniewski Wrangler Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Makati, Metro Manila Posts: 2,706 Images: 32	Hi Andreas, here's my initial impressions of the teaser before going to your website: Overall very nice and smooth and it drew me in. It made me want to find out more about what those guys are doing. My impression is that this is a sport video for gymnasts, but I wasn't positive - it made me wonder if this might also be a documentary. Notes: Your branding was way too subtle for me: - I kept wondering what the name of the DVD was if I wanted to look it up? It's not clear from the teaser. - The website did not stick in my head during the 1st and 2nd viewings because I was busy watching the action. - I missed the branding/info at the end because your jazzy music, which drew me in, stopped, and I thought the video was over. I only saw the ending credits the third time around because I was busy doing something else and let it play through. - Personally I'd move the Atashami logo. Maybe to the very, very beginning or end of the teaser, or overlay it onto the opening tage line sequence so it's associated with your tag line. The reason is that the beginning sequences: WARNING, tag line, and guy on the beach all drew me toward the subject of the video but the Atashami logo is just eye candy it doesn't have anything to do with the subject of the video and feels out of place. Once again though, very nicely done. __________________ "Ultimately, the most extraordinary thing, in a frame, is a human being." - Martin Scorsese

October 8th, 2003, 08:02 PM	#525
Guest Posts: n/a	Get Goosed! No... I'm not being naughty or trying to get anyone's hackles up. "Get Goosed!" despite what it may sound like, is the title of my family, feature film that premiered two weeks ago here in Colorado. It's about an elderly Native American man and his best friend, a Canada goose. The old man lives in a rest home and has pretty much given up on life until he meets the goose. The spark of life returns... he checks out of the rest home and buys a ranch, which he intends to share with his new friend. But a federal bureaucrat has different ideas and tries to confiscate the goose. In the end, the people of the old man's mountain community rally to his support... the bureaucrat gets goosed, and the old man rekindles his relationship with his son and granddaughter. We had two scheduled performances. Both sold out, and we did a carry-over the following day (the house seats 350). We sold 180 VHS tapes and 80 DVDs at the premiere. Two cable networks and two distributors are now talking with our Executive Producer. Things might happen. Which is good, because I worked on it for three years... during which our human star suffered a stroke that nearly killed him (21 days into a 28 day schedule), and a malfeasant teenager killed our goose star. I also spent a lot of money learning some lessons the hard way about some editors' integrity. Everyone on the film, except me, has been paid (I wrote it, directed it and wound up finishing the editing). I'm ready for a paycheck. Top Ramen is really starting to suck. I mention all this because the film is a hybrid. Most of it was shot on 16mm film; but about 1/3 (scenic and wildlife shots) of it was done with a Canon XL-1s in the frame movie mode with a 1/2 black promist filter. Except for one interior that wasn't lit well, I defy anyone to tell the difference. I'm really impressed with that little camera and what it can do... so was my son-in-law, whose father just happens to own Foto-Kem in Burbank. Michael (my son-in-law) said Foto-Kem is building a new facility just to do digital fimmaking postproduction. I'm not saying film is dead. But as far as I'm concerned, it sure has been kicked in the...