Show Your Work 2003

Mark Moore · July 25th, 2003, 12:54 PM

Beautiful pics, Hannes. I thoroughly enjoyed them. Congratulations also on the authentic clothing. Very interesting.

Good luck with the shooting.

Charlie Tran · July 25th, 2003, 04:43 PM

This is something we shot and edited in about 4 or 5 hours one boring summer day. Check it out, and give me a ring if any of you guys are interested in our security service ;D.

small version (1.8 megs)

large version (6.1 megs)

right click either and "save target as" -- encoded with divx 5

Curtis T. Stoeber · July 25th, 2003, 07:45 PM

I like the idea. Would have liked to see some more violence though. You can never have enough violence... people eat it up. :)

Anyway there seems to be a lot of headroom on both the top and bottom of the screen that could be done away with. Letterboxing it might have helped. Check out this hack job I did really quick to give you an idea:

Click here to see the JPEG

What I did was pan the original image down a bit and then letterbox it. Composition and framing are really important when you want to direct the viewer's attention to something. I found myself looking at the street, mostly. Live and learn! :)

Alex Knappenberger · July 25th, 2003, 08:08 PM

Yeah, I liked the idea too, it was catchy and funny, more voilence would be good, heh.

Was it really shot on a XL1 though? Don't take this the wrong way, but it looks pretty bad if it was. The whole car was pretty much blown out, the sky was unusually dark, and it was pretty noisey, it wasn't the compression either. :D

For future use, you should of either:

1. Had a different (darker) color car.

2. Took the exposure down a bit.

3. Found a different location/shot it when the light source (sun) was in a better position, such as early morning or late evening.

Charlie Tran · July 26th, 2003, 01:18 AM

nope, it was shot with a sony dcr110 handheld dv cam on a mini tripod. i was pretty pleased that it came out only as bad as it did :D

yeah, i see the exposure probs the more that i watch it as well. mental note duely taken :|

thanks for the feedback/advice! love this forum

Alex Taylor · July 26th, 2003, 01:44 AM

That's great! It's wonderfully simple and pretty damn funny too. It has all the right ingredients to be a real commercial.

Josh Frye · July 26th, 2003, 10:21 AM

Great concept. Do agree with Alex on the exposure/quality issues. Keep up the good work.

Curtis T. Stoeber · July 26th, 2003, 11:56 AM

Here is something we did for fun over two years ago. This is an attempt at random comedy.

Click here to download 31.3 MB Quicktime

I am aware of the overexposure, unsteady camera, dirty lens. But hopefully you'll be entertained by this all the same.

Keith Loh · July 26th, 2003, 12:42 PM

Cute. :)

Curtis T. Stoeber · July 26th, 2003, 08:49 PM

I was wondering if people who download this on a broadband (anything better than dialup, actually) could, in addition to whatever they think about the Quicktime file, tell me what kind of average speeds they were getting for the download and if that comes close to your top-rated speed. Any info would be appreciated. Thanks!

Keith Loh · July 27th, 2003, 01:09 AM

105kb/sec on a DSL. Got it in less than five minutes. My bandwidth really fluctuates so I can't tell if that is good or not.

Alex Taylor · July 27th, 2003, 01:19 AM

Haha that was funny.

Mine spiked at 120k/sec at the start, then slowly went down to around 70-90.

Kevin Boucher · July 27th, 2003, 03:16 PM

Hello all DVi and DV enthusiasts! I just finished doing the subtitles for a short film my team and I made back in may for school. It took us maybe 70 hours. We made it in one week.

It's called "Locus et la Machine"

Shot with Panasonic AG-DVX100 NTSC
20 Megs. Quicktime

http://www.onidrift.com/locus.mov

some frame grabs

http://www.onidrift.com/locus-screen1.jpg
http://www.onidrift.com/locus-screen2.jpg

Hope you enjoy,
tell me what you think.

Alex Taylor · July 27th, 2003, 06:09 PM

I like the opening shot, very nice!

Is the flickering in the prison scene editing or was it flickering light? It creates an interesting effect but it's tad overdone IMO.

I love that one shot in the bathroom when he's looking in the mirror and those two guys start fighting. Good eye!

There's a humming in the court scenes, was that an air conditioner or something?

Your composition is great the whole way through. Well done!

Kevin Boucher · July 27th, 2003, 07:37 PM

<<<-- Originally posted by Alex Taylor : I like the opening shot, very nice!-->>>

Thanks alot! Even though it looks warm, it was shot on a freezing may mourning :)

<<<--Is the flickering in the prison scene editing or was it flickering light? It creates an interesting effect but it's tad overdone IMO.-->>>

That was a flickering light.

<<<-- I love that one shot in the bathroom when he's looking in the mirror and those two guys start fighting. Good eye!-->>>

Thanks :) With the AG-DVX100, it's easy to pull a focus changing shot because it is numerised. You look at your point A and memorize the number then look at point B and memorize it's number... then all you have to do is change from one number to the other.

<<<-- There's a humming in the court scenes, was that an air conditioner or something?-->>>

Unfortunatly, we borrowed the city court for one after noon and we weren't well enough equipped for the audio. You've guessed right, the humming is the air conditioner.

<<<-- Your composition is great the whole way through. Well done! -->>>

I'm glad that you took the time to watch it and enjoyed it! Although the quality of the video on a tv screen is a thousand times better, the story and some shots can be enjoyed on the internet :)

Thanks again, Alex, for your comments and suggestions :) It's good to have critiques around to give advice and opinions so that our movies can get better.

July 25th, 2003, 12:54 PM	#361
Mark Moore Major Player Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: North Carolina Posts: 301	Beautiful pics, Hannes. I thoroughly enjoyed them. Congratulations also on the authentic clothing. Very interesting. Good luck with the shooting. __________________ Mark Moore Sugar Free Productions

July 25th, 2003, 04:43 PM	#362
Charlie Tran New Boot Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: San Diego Posts: 6	my car security commercial This is something we shot and edited in about 4 or 5 hours one boring summer day. Check it out, and give me a ring if any of you guys are interested in our security service ;D. small version (1.8 megs) large version (6.1 megs) right click either and "save target as" -- encoded with divx 5 __________________ Charlie Tran, Superman Online Portfolio: http://charlie.mg2.org/ Short films: http://charlie.mg2.org/switch/

July 26th, 2003, 01:18 AM	#365
Charlie Tran New Boot Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: San Diego Posts: 6	nope, it was shot with a sony dcr110 handheld dv cam on a mini tripod. i was pretty pleased that it came out only as bad as it did :D yeah, i see the exposure probs the more that i watch it as well. mental note duely taken :\| thanks for the feedback/advice! love this forum __________________ Charlie Tran, Superman Online Portfolio: http://charlie.mg2.org/ Short films: http://charlie.mg2.org/switch/

July 26th, 2003, 01:44 AM	#366
Alex Taylor Major Player Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Vancouver, BC Posts: 390	That's great! It's wonderfully simple and pretty damn funny too. It has all the right ingredients to be a real commercial. __________________ alextaylor.org

July 26th, 2003, 10:21 AM	#367
Josh Frye Regular Crew Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Berlin Germany Posts: 46	Great concept. Do agree with Alex on the exposure/quality issues. Keep up the good work. __________________ Cheers

July 25th, 2003, 07:45 PM	#363
Curtis T. Stoeber Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Lakewood Colorado USA Posts: 150	I like the idea. Would have liked to see some more violence though. You can never have enough violence... people eat it up. :) Anyway there seems to be a lot of headroom on both the top and bottom of the screen that could be done away with. Letterboxing it might have helped. Check out this hack job I did really quick to give you an idea: Click here to see the JPEG What I did was pan the original image down a bit and then letterbox it. Composition and framing are really important when you want to direct the viewer's attention to something. I found myself looking at the street, mostly. Live and learn! :)

July 25th, 2003, 08:08 PM	#364
Alex Knappenberger High School Student Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Canton, Ohio, USA Posts: 609	Yeah, I liked the idea too, it was catchy and funny, more voilence would be good, heh. Was it really shot on a XL1 though? Don't take this the wrong way, but it looks pretty bad if it was. The whole car was pretty much blown out, the sky was unusually dark, and it was pretty noisey, it wasn't the compression either. :D For future use, you should of either: 1. Had a different (darker) color car. 2. Took the exposure down a bit. 3. Found a different location/shot it when the light source (sun) was in a better position, such as early morning or late evening.

July 26th, 2003, 11:56 AM	#368
Curtis T. Stoeber Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Lakewood Colorado USA Posts: 150	The Egg Incident Here is something we did for fun over two years ago. This is an attempt at random comedy. Click here to download 31.3 MB Quicktime I am aware of the overexposure, unsteady camera, dirty lens. But hopefully you'll be entertained by this all the same.

July 26th, 2003, 12:42 PM	#369
Keith Loh Air China Pilot Join Date: May 2002 Location: Vancouver, B.C. Posts: 2,389	Cute. :) __________________ -- Visit http://www.KeithLoh.com \| stuff about living in Vancouver \| My Flickr photo gallery

July 26th, 2003, 08:49 PM	#370
Curtis T. Stoeber Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Lakewood Colorado USA Posts: 150	I was wondering if people who download this on a broadband (anything better than dialup, actually) could, in addition to whatever they think about the Quicktime file, tell me what kind of average speeds they were getting for the download and if that comes close to your top-rated speed. Any info would be appreciated. Thanks!

July 27th, 2003, 01:09 AM	#371
Keith Loh Air China Pilot Join Date: May 2002 Location: Vancouver, B.C. Posts: 2,389	105kb/sec on a DSL. Got it in less than five minutes. My bandwidth really fluctuates so I can't tell if that is good or not. __________________ -- Visit http://www.KeithLoh.com \| stuff about living in Vancouver \| My Flickr photo gallery

July 27th, 2003, 01:19 AM	#372
Alex Taylor Major Player Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Vancouver, BC Posts: 390	Haha that was funny. Mine spiked at 120k/sec at the start, then slowly went down to around 70-90. __________________ alextaylor.org

July 27th, 2003, 03:16 PM	#373
Kevin Boucher New Boot Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Québec, Canada Posts: 23	Locus et la Machine - Short film Hello all DVi and DV enthusiasts! I just finished doing the subtitles for a short film my team and I made back in may for school. It took us maybe 70 hours. We made it in one week. It's called "Locus et la Machine" Shot with Panasonic AG-DVX100 NTSC 20 Megs. Quicktime http://www.onidrift.com/locus.mov some frame grabs http://www.onidrift.com/locus-screen1.jpg http://www.onidrift.com/locus-screen2.jpg Hope you enjoy, tell me what you think.

July 27th, 2003, 06:09 PM	#374
Alex Taylor Major Player Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Vancouver, BC Posts: 390	I like the opening shot, very nice! Is the flickering in the prison scene editing or was it flickering light? It creates an interesting effect but it's tad overdone IMO. I love that one shot in the bathroom when he's looking in the mirror and those two guys start fighting. Good eye! There's a humming in the court scenes, was that an air conditioner or something? Your composition is great the whole way through. Well done! __________________ alextaylor.org

July 27th, 2003, 07:37 PM	#375
Kevin Boucher New Boot Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Québec, Canada Posts: 23	<<<-- Originally posted by Alex Taylor : I like the opening shot, very nice!-->>> Thanks alot! Even though it looks warm, it was shot on a freezing may mourning :) <<<--Is the flickering in the prison scene editing or was it flickering light? It creates an interesting effect but it's tad overdone IMO.-->>> That was a flickering light. <<<-- I love that one shot in the bathroom when he's looking in the mirror and those two guys start fighting. Good eye!-->>> Thanks :) With the AG-DVX100, it's easy to pull a focus changing shot because it is numerised. You look at your point A and memorize the number then look at point B and memorize it's number... then all you have to do is change from one number to the other. <<<-- There's a humming in the court scenes, was that an air conditioner or something?-->>> Unfortunatly, we borrowed the city court for one after noon and we weren't well enough equipped for the audio. You've guessed right, the humming is the air conditioner. <<<-- Your composition is great the whole way through. Well done! -->>> I'm glad that you took the time to watch it and enjoyed it! Although the quality of the video on a tv screen is a thousand times better, the story and some shots can be enjoyed on the internet :) Thanks again, Alex, for your comments and suggestions :) It's good to have critiques around to give advice and opinions so that our movies can get better.