Show Your Work 2006

Wes Coughlin · December 1st, 2006, 06:12 PM

Good acting, and very creative.

Gints Klimanis · December 1st, 2006, 06:15 PM

Nice. This trailer was much more engaging than your previous short film. Are you in the religious film genre? Cool. And thank you very much for the behind the scenes movies. In particular, I liked watching how you filmed the opening scene of the movie with the fellow running. Very cool scene. Excellent choice of bad guys.

One comment about the trailer, which I also liked. Consider swapping the two scenes of the daughter (brown headscarf) asking about the bibles, as the first answers the question asked in the second.

I'm looking forward to seeing this movie sometime.

Brandon Rice · December 1st, 2006, 07:07 PM

Thanks for watching! I indeed enjoy the religious aspect of films and a message... I think all films have a message to an audience... Thanks for watching again, and we are hoping to have this film finished by Jan. 2007.

Chris Harris · December 2nd, 2006, 12:15 AM

When I saw the test subject explode, I exploded with laughter. Great job!

Derrick A.Jones · December 2nd, 2006, 12:58 PM

This film was funny man. Kind od depressing to see him go through that just cause his freind wouldn't hang out with him. Music was a good selection. dont have much time to comment but it hink the film was pretty good - pz

Wes Coughlin · December 2nd, 2006, 04:02 PM

Hey, we have the same last names!

Matthew Rogers · December 2nd, 2006, 09:13 PM

I would like you all to take a look at my reel: http://www.macvilleproductions.com/m...rogersreel.mov

Tell me what's good and bad.

Thanks,

Matthew Rogers

Jeff Cottrone · December 2nd, 2006, 11:07 PM

Funny right up to the reseach scientist part. I'd cut everything after the he/she person. The rest was great.

G. Scott Roberts · December 3rd, 2006, 01:06 AM

Excellent video quality, no audio though without soundtrack... might want to cut in a few audio/video clips over soundtrack, text cuts out too quick, too hard to read without rewinding / reading again, cut out last 5 seconds of black video. Looks good, like the animation at beginning but should cut out the repeated animation at the end.

Austin R. Hartman · December 4th, 2006, 01:50 AM

hi,
this is Austin R. Hartman and I finished my new short. It is a new style and voice for me. But this will be my first submission to sundance next year. I want your thoughts, criticisms, etc...

please watch at:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=97RomIMuu00
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=97RomIMuu00
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=97RomIMuu00

and send your comments to arhartman@gmail.com

tell your friends and family and get their feedback too...

thank you so much...

143,
-Austin R. Hartman

Rob Yannetta · December 4th, 2006, 03:42 PM

Started in July 2006, this 5 minute, 55 second short took 5 months to complete. Overcoming a near fatal cancerous tumor and ongoing cancer treatment, I managed to finish this final installment in the series with some much deserved laughs. Take that cancer!

Visit http://www.loudorangecat.com/movies/ to download the final installment (I swear) in the Bad Cat series.

Sean McHenry · December 4th, 2006, 04:42 PM

My next little horror short is now available for your viewing. It's more a Twilight Zone or Outer Limits type thing really but there is some minor bloodshed. "Track 11"

Some folks are really liking it. I sort of like it too. Naturally I see all it's flaws - so you don't really need to point them out unless you feel extremely compelled to do so.

You are welcome to see all my shorts on my web page at
http://www.DeepBlueEdit.com
or on MySpace at
http://www.MySpace.com/DeepBlueEdit

"Cat Fight at OK and Corral" has been watched or downloaded over 17,000 times in just under 3 months.

I don't get to these forums as much as I used to but feel free to leave comments or catch my e-mail off the web pages.

Alex Ferrari of "Broken" liked it. Mike Flanagan of "Oculus" liked it. You might like it too. Turn off the lights at 2am and turn up the sound.

Thanks,

Sean

Sonny Costin · December 4th, 2006, 10:34 PM

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hVvpaeQrRm4

my first wedding i shot and edited, any opinions would be great thanks.

Jeff Cottrone · December 5th, 2006, 04:21 PM

Austin,

I enjoyed it. Took me a minute to get into it. Kind of...too artsy at first, but I came around and found it very sublime. Nice.

Colin Sato · December 6th, 2006, 03:48 AM

Hi Rob,

I watched all the videos in the series, and enjoyed them a lot. My only comments are some inconsistant sound with some areas too soft and some too loud. I loved the story line but think the "farting" did run a bit long (as you mentioned on your page).

I've got a couple of cat videos you might get a smile from. Just me messin' around with my new kittens.

As you know, cats are always waking you up in the morning before you're ready. This little video explains why: http://www.satoauto.com/video/24_cats_512.wmv

Jack decided to make a withdrawl from our coin sorter. I grabbed the camera and a short clip spiraled out of control. Before you knew it, I needed to act, my wife needed to act and all for this fun clip. http://www.satoauto.com/video/Framed.wmv

December 1st, 2006, 06:12 PM	#1081
Wes Coughlin Major Player Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Bend, Oregon Posts: 206	Good acting, and very creative. __________________ http://wildlookout.com

December 2nd, 2006, 12:58 PM	#1085
Derrick A.Jones Regular Crew Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: St. Petersburg,FL Posts: 94	This film was funny man. Kind od depressing to see him go through that just cause his freind wouldn't hang out with him. Music was a good selection. dont have much time to comment but it hink the film was pretty good - pz __________________ This is what i do for the love of Video Production.. Derrick Jones..........

December 2nd, 2006, 04:02 PM	#1086
Wes Coughlin Major Player Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Bend, Oregon Posts: 206	Hey, we have the same last names! __________________ http://wildlookout.com

December 2nd, 2006, 09:13 PM	#1087
Matthew Rogers Regular Crew Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Knoxville, TN Posts: 152	Camera Op/Editor Reel I would like you all to take a look at my reel: http://www.macvilleproductions.com/m...rogersreel.mov Tell me what's good and bad. Thanks, Matthew Rogers

December 3rd, 2006, 01:06 AM	#1089
G. Scott Roberts New Boot Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Lake Elsinore, CA Posts: 22	Excellent video quality, no audio though without soundtrack... might want to cut in a few audio/video clips over soundtrack, text cuts out too quick, too hard to read without rewinding / reading again, cut out last 5 seconds of black video. Looks good, like the animation at beginning but should cut out the repeated animation at the end. __________________ Canon XL1s, Canon Digital Rebel, Misc. lenses and other toys... : )

December 1st, 2006, 06:15 PM	#1082
Gints Klimanis Inner Circle Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: San Jose, CA Posts: 2,222	Nice. This trailer was much more engaging than your previous short film. Are you in the religious film genre? Cool. And thank you very much for the behind the scenes movies. In particular, I liked watching how you filmed the opening scene of the movie with the fellow running. Very cool scene. Excellent choice of bad guys. One comment about the trailer, which I also liked. Consider swapping the two scenes of the daughter (brown headscarf) asking about the bibles, as the first answers the question asked in the second. I'm looking forward to seeing this movie sometime.

December 1st, 2006, 07:07 PM	#1083
Brandon Rice New Boot Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Los Angeles, California Posts: 8	Thanks for watching! I indeed enjoy the religious aspect of films and a message... I think all films have a message to an audience... Thanks for watching again, and we are hoping to have this film finished by Jan. 2007.

December 2nd, 2006, 12:15 AM	#1084
Chris Harris Major Player Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: San Francisco, California Posts: 487	When I saw the test subject explode, I exploded with laughter. Great job!

December 2nd, 2006, 11:07 PM	#1088
Jeff Cottrone Regular Crew Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Rochester, NY Posts: 100	Funny right up to the reseach scientist part. I'd cut everything after the he/she person. The rest was great.

December 4th, 2006, 01:50 AM	#1090
Austin R. Hartman New Boot Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: United States Posts: 12	"friends, And Love", my new short, and I need your help... hi, this is Austin R. Hartman and I finished my new short. It is a new style and voice for me. But this will be my first submission to sundance next year. I want your thoughts, criticisms, etc... please watch at: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=97RomIMuu00 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=97RomIMuu00 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=97RomIMuu00 and send your comments to arhartman@gmail.com tell your friends and family and get their feedback too... thank you so much... 143, -Austin R. Hartman __________________ Go Mordecai!

December 4th, 2006, 03:42 PM	#1091
Rob Yannetta Regular Crew Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: St. Petersburg, FL Posts: 85	"Bad Cat 5: The Final Meow" NOW AVAILABLE Started in July 2006, this 5 minute, 55 second short took 5 months to complete. Overcoming a near fatal cancerous tumor and ongoing cancer treatment, I managed to finish this final installment in the series with some much deserved laughs. Take that cancer! Visit http://www.loudorangecat.com/movies/ to download the final installment (I swear) in the Bad Cat series. __________________ Robert M Yannetta, Loud Orange Cat Productions http://LoudOrangeCat.com

December 4th, 2006, 04:42 PM	#1092
Sean McHenry Trustee Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Hilliard, Ohio Posts: 1,193	Track 11 - horror short up My next little horror short is now available for your viewing. It's more a Twilight Zone or Outer Limits type thing really but there is some minor bloodshed. "Track 11" Some folks are really liking it. I sort of like it too. Naturally I see all it's flaws - so you don't really need to point them out unless you feel extremely compelled to do so. You are welcome to see all my shorts on my web page at http://www.DeepBlueEdit.com or on MySpace at http://www.MySpace.com/DeepBlueEdit "Cat Fight at OK and Corral" has been watched or downloaded over 17,000 times in just under 3 months. I don't get to these forums as much as I used to but feel free to leave comments or catch my e-mail off the web pages. Alex Ferrari of "Broken" liked it. Mike Flanagan of "Oculus" liked it. You might like it too. Turn off the lights at 2am and turn up the sound. Thanks, Sean __________________ ‘I don’t know what I’m doing, and I’m shooting on D.V.’ - my hero - David Lynch http://www.DeepBlueEdit.com

December 4th, 2006, 10:34 PM	#1093
Sonny Costin New Boot Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Gold Coast, Australia Posts: 21	Wedding Montage Shot on Z1 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hVvpaeQrRm4 my first wedding i shot and edited, any opinions would be great thanks.

December 5th, 2006, 04:21 PM	#1094
Jeff Cottrone Regular Crew Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Rochester, NY Posts: 100	Austin, I enjoyed it. Took me a minute to get into it. Kind of...too artsy at first, but I came around and found it very sublime. Nice.

December 6th, 2006, 03:48 AM	#1095
Colin Sato Regular Crew Join Date: May 2005 Location: Honolulu Posts: 85	Hi Rob, I watched all the videos in the series, and enjoyed them a lot. My only comments are some inconsistant sound with some areas too soft and some too loud. I loved the story line but think the "farting" did run a bit long (as you mentioned on your page). I've got a couple of cat videos you might get a smile from. Just me messin' around with my new kittens. As you know, cats are always waking you up in the morning before you're ready. This little video explains why: http://www.satoauto.com/video/24_cats_512.wmv Jack decided to make a withdrawl from our coin sorter. I grabbed the camera and a short clip spiraled out of control. Before you knew it, I needed to act, my wife needed to act and all for this fun clip. http://www.satoauto.com/video/Framed.wmv