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June 6th, 2019, 07:19 AM
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Short film for your critique
Hey guys,
Just finished a new short film that I would like to show you. Very important theme in this story and we tried to be as sober as possible. It's a bit stylized and oppressive but I think in the end it leaves you with a positive feeling that it's both hopeful and complex. Hope you enjoy it. Pass: insidefilmscreener Let me know what you think. Last edited by David Evans; June 6th, 2019 at 12:13 PM. |
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June 6th, 2019, 10:20 AM
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Re: Short film for your critique
I think you need to check your password.
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June 6th, 2019, 12:14 PM
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Re: Short film for your critique
Right you are Donald. Just corrected in the original post.
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June 8th, 2019, 06:29 AM
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Re: Short film for your critique
Is the password working now?
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June 9th, 2019, 10:27 AM
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Re: Short film for your critique
It's not working
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June 9th, 2019, 12:08 PM
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Re: Short film for your critique
That's weird... Just double checked. Password is insidefilmscreener. Anyone else having problems viewing the video?
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June 9th, 2019, 12:48 PM
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Re: Short film for your critique
Can't see it, just provide a direct link to Vimeo.
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June 9th, 2019, 01:04 PM
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Re: Short film for your critique
Here it is
vimeo.com/340405576 |
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June 13th, 2019, 07:51 AM
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Re: Short film for your critique
Hey guys, just wondering if anyone was able to load the video.
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June 13th, 2019, 08:59 AM
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Re: Short film for your critique
The password works for me but the link doesn't.
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June 29th, 2019, 02:30 AM
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Re: Short film for your critique
Trailer is out :
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July 18th, 2019, 11:16 AM
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Re: Short film for your critique
Hey David,
I was able to see the whole thing. I like the shooting, well done for this type of flic. I would be critical of the audio mix though. It is over the top. There are times when the male actor is clearly not breathing heavy. But it seems to me you added loud heavy breathing in post for the effect. To me, it is so overpowering and out of place it sounds like a third person is in the room watching them. Well done short. I hope it works for you. Kind Regards, Steve
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July 24th, 2019, 12:26 AM
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Re: Short film for your critique
Hey Steven, thanks for watching. Yeah, I am still not happy with some bits of the heavy breathing. If you have the time, could you point out for the parts that distracted you the most?
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