May 6th, 2015, 05:25 PM | #1 |
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My Latest Short Film
Please view my latest entry into the "Bike Shorts" competition in Virginia, USA. Here's a link:
It won the "audience choice" award in this small film festival--only 13 entries. However, it recently was rejected in two other film competitions. My question is: how do you shorten a film like this but still get the idea of the film across to the viewer. P.S. Please view the entire film. There is a scene after the credits. (Would you have put the final scene BEFORE the credits.) Thanks in advance for your constructive criticism. |
May 7th, 2015, 11:32 AM | #2 |
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Re: My Latest Short Film
I have put scenes after the credits in a couple of things. It is always a fail. YMMV
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