Hercules Fence Web Commercial at DVinfo.net

Jeff Krepner · May 20th, 2010, 10:33 AM

Hey Everyone,

I'm done with this video, but I'm curious to hear feedback from some other working pros. It's basically an extended web commercial that describes a bit about their business. It's 3mins which is probably way too long but that was the target length I was given so I went with it. Also, I figure the target customer would be someone interested in learning more about fences--which is why they are at the site in the first place.

I didn't have much time on this one and I'm booked with other work, so this just kind of came out this way. With that said, I still feel like I'm trying to get to the next level on my own productions and can't quite get there. Thoughts (other than quit the business)?

Thanks in advance for any feedback.

- JFK.

Dane Cannon · May 24th, 2010, 11:50 AM

FWIW, I thought it looked really well done. The graphics looked fine... the only thing I would've changed was to have the stills fill the whole frame (but they may have been too small...).

Paul Cascio · May 25th, 2010, 07:43 AM

Nice job, good pace and the VO was well-suited to the product. Only suggestion is to pop the phone and website up occasionally for people who don't want/need to watch all the way through.

Jeff Krepner · May 28th, 2010, 08:01 AM

Thanks Guys for the feedback and suggestions. It is really nice to hear feedback, so thanks for taking the time to post.

-Jeff

May 20th, 2010, 10:33 AM	#1
Jeff Krepner Regular Crew Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Timonium, MD Posts: 142	Hercules Fence Web Commercial Hey Everyone, I'm done with this video, but I'm curious to hear feedback from some other working pros. It's basically an extended web commercial that describes a bit about their business. It's 3mins which is probably way too long but that was the target length I was given so I went with it. Also, I figure the target customer would be someone interested in learning more about fences--which is why they are at the site in the first place. I didn't have much time on this one and I'm booked with other work, so this just kind of came out this way. With that said, I still feel like I'm trying to get to the next level on my own productions and can't quite get there. Thoughts (other than quit the business)? Thanks in advance for any feedback. Hercules Fence Web Commercial on Vimeo - JFK.

May 25th, 2010, 07:43 AM	#3
Paul Cascio Trustee Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Bristol, CT (Home of EPSN) Posts: 1,192	Nice job, good pace and the VO was well-suited to the product. Only suggestion is to pop the phone and website up occasionally for people who don't want/need to watch all the way through. __________________ Paul Cascio www.pictureframingschool.com

May 24th, 2010, 11:50 AM	#2
Dane Cannon New Boot Join Date: May 2010 Location: LA, CA Posts: 11	FWIW, I thought it looked really well done. The graphics looked fine... the only thing I would've changed was to have the stills fill the whole frame (but they may have been too small...).

May 28th, 2010, 08:01 AM	#4
Jeff Krepner Regular Crew Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Timonium, MD Posts: 142	Thanks Guys for the feedback and suggestions. It is really nice to hear feedback, so thanks for taking the time to post. -Jeff