Please critique this show's open. at DVinfo.net

Corey Williams · March 16th, 2010, 01:00 PM

My sister got this opening for a television show. I would like to get honest feedback about it.

Thanks,

Corey

David Barnett · March 16th, 2010, 02:36 PM

A little hard to hear what they're saying with the music & vocals of the music. Aside from that it's good. A little bit bland though, in that it's just people standing in front of a backdrop talking. Not very dynamic or revealing into insight of the show.

Buba Kastorski · March 16th, 2010, 11:08 PM

I like the look, but you need rich sound;
also titling does not go well with the video, I would use colored , much smaller, simple font with time remapping movements,

March 16th, 2010, 01:00 PM	#1
Corey Williams Regular Crew Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: McKinney,TX/New Orleans, LA Posts: 104	Please critique this show's open. My sister got this opening for a television show. I would like to get honest feedback about it. Stylebrity "The Cut" TV Show Intro on Vimeo Thanks, Corey

March 16th, 2010, 11:08 PM	#3
Buba Kastorski Trustee Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Toronto Posts: 1,414	I like the look, but you need rich sound; also titling does not go well with the video, I would use colored , much smaller, simple font with time remapping movements, __________________ I love this place!

March 16th, 2010, 02:36 PM	#2
David Barnett Major Player Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Philly, PA Posts: 951	A little hard to hear what they're saying with the music & vocals of the music. Aside from that it's good. A little bit bland though, in that it's just people standing in front of a backdrop talking. Not very dynamic or revealing into insight of the show.