Surf Shop Commercial at DVinfo.net

Bill Thesken · January 22nd, 2010, 12:46 AM

Here's a short video I put together for a new surf shop in Hawaii. It's going to premiere on a big screen at a boxing match in a stadium this Saturday. I hope it looks good... Comments please!

Kamaaina Surf & Sport By Bill Thesken On ExposureRoom

Andrew Smith · January 22nd, 2010, 07:20 AM

Just a few quick things ....

The boom at the beginning sounds a tad distorted. Don't know if this is the case or not.

Outdoor footage has got stunningly good colour, and it really contrasts with the in-shop lighting. Kinda makes the shop look not as good as the outdoors.

Do wish that some of the shots of the surfers were zoomed in a bit tighter on the action.

The song used sounds like the right thing to appeal to the hearts of those whom I presume is their target audience. Surfing is their escape to freedom, yada yada yada.

Phone number at the end needs to be a bit bigger in size and longer in duration. Not that people are going to memorise it from the ad, but .... you know.

Andrew

Bill Thesken · January 22nd, 2010, 01:43 PM

Thanks Andrew, hows the weather down under today?

Andrew Smith · January 22nd, 2010, 10:52 PM

Quite warm. Just the perfect summer weather to be on the beach!

With Australia Day (public holiday) on Tuesday, a lot of people make it effectively a 4 day weekend by taking Monday off. We Aussies love our long weekends.

Andrew

January 22nd, 2010, 12:46 AM	#1
Bill Thesken Major Player Join Date: May 2008 Location: HI, USA Posts: 622	Surf Shop Commercial Here's a short video I put together for a new surf shop in Hawaii. It's going to premiere on a big screen at a boxing match in a stadium this Saturday. I hope it looks good... Comments please! Kamaaina Surf & Sport By Bill Thesken On ExposureRoom

January 22nd, 2010, 07:20 AM	#2
Andrew Smith Equal Opportunity Offender Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Brisbane, Australia Posts: 3,072	Just a few quick things .... The boom at the beginning sounds a tad distorted. Don't know if this is the case or not. Outdoor footage has got stunningly good colour, and it really contrasts with the in-shop lighting. Kinda makes the shop look not as good as the outdoors. Do wish that some of the shots of the surfers were zoomed in a bit tighter on the action. The song used sounds like the right thing to appeal to the hearts of those whom I presume is their target audience. Surfing is their escape to freedom, yada yada yada. Phone number at the end needs to be a bit bigger in size and longer in duration. Not that people are going to memorise it from the ad, but .... you know. Andrew

January 22nd, 2010, 01:43 PM	#3
Bill Thesken Major Player Join Date: May 2008 Location: HI, USA Posts: 622	Thanks Andrew, hows the weather down under today?

January 22nd, 2010, 10:52 PM	#4
Andrew Smith Equal Opportunity Offender Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Brisbane, Australia Posts: 3,072	Quite warm. Just the perfect summer weather to be on the beach! With Australia Day (public holiday) on Tuesday, a lot of people make it effectively a 4 day weekend by taking Monday off. We Aussies love our long weekends. Andrew