The End of the Line (7 min Short)

Linda Schodowsky · June 21st, 2004, 03:35 PM

Jeff, Devin...

Awesome job! The voice over really helped out alot. The background music fits well! Let us know how it goes!

Devin Doyle · June 21st, 2004, 09:30 PM

Barry + Linda: Thanks for taking the time to drop back by and watch the competition cut. All of us feel the same way you do about the piece, the light VOs help clarify some things, and cutting a few vignettes helped the pacing a lot. Thanks to you guys' and everyone elses comments, it really helped gain an objective view of how "end of the line" is interpreted!

June 21st, 2004, 09:30 PM	#17
Devin Doyle Regular Crew Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Los Angeles, CA Posts: 188	Barry + Linda: Thanks for taking the time to drop back by and watch the competition cut. All of us feel the same way you do about the piece, the light VOs help clarify some things, and cutting a few vignettes helped the pacing a lot. Thanks to you guys' and everyone elses comments, it really helped gain an objective view of how "end of the line" is interpreted! __________________ http://devin.par-t-com.net

June 21st, 2004, 03:35 PM	#16
Linda Schodowsky Regular Crew Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Berea, Ohio Posts: 139	Jeff, Devin... Awesome job! The voice over really helped out alot. The background music fits well! Let us know how it goes!