Trailer for new feature: Color at DVinfo.net

Cory Sheldon · June 22nd, 2009, 11:34 AM

Here is a trailer for a feature (my first) I'm currently finishing up. Shot with a canon xha1 with a redrock 35mm adapter. All the animation with lightwave/motion/combustion/photoshop.

Let me know what you think.

Color : trailer 1 : on Vimeo

Jeff Harper · June 22nd, 2009, 11:48 AM

Preface: your skills are excellent, shots are nice, animation is wonderful, sound is great, lighting is fine. Technically your trailer is very nice.

From a viewer's perspective, the trailer seems to be a miscellaneous assortment of clips that do not make sense as assembled. If they do make sense as assembled, then it takes better powers of observation than I have.

It does not quite make me interested enough to see more. It just left me scratching my head.

It is unfortunate as it is clear that you put tons of work into it.

Take my review with a grain of salt, and lets see what others have to say.

Reggie Moser · June 27th, 2009, 01:11 AM

I have to agree with Jeff..great visuals, but there's just not enough in the trailer to get a real sense of what the fim may possibly be about.....and I watched it 5 times to make sure.....It almosts seems as though you may be holding back not to reveal the plot......

June 22nd, 2009, 11:34 AM	#1
Cory Sheldon Regular Crew Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Cleveland, OH Posts: 33	Trailer for new feature: Color Here is a trailer for a feature (my first) I'm currently finishing up. Shot with a canon xha1 with a redrock 35mm adapter. All the animation with lightwave/motion/combustion/photoshop. Let me know what you think. Color : trailer 1 : on Vimeo

June 22nd, 2009, 11:48 AM	#2
Jeff Harper Inner Circle Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Cincinnati, OH Posts: 8,425	Preface: your skills are excellent, shots are nice, animation is wonderful, sound is great, lighting is fine. Technically your trailer is very nice. From a viewer's perspective, the trailer seems to be a miscellaneous assortment of clips that do not make sense as assembled. If they do make sense as assembled, then it takes better powers of observation than I have. It does not quite make me interested enough to see more. It just left me scratching my head. It is unfortunate as it is clear that you put tons of work into it. Take my review with a grain of salt, and lets see what others have to say.

June 27th, 2009, 01:11 AM	#3
Reggie Moser Regular Crew Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Charlotte, NC Posts: 113	I have to agree with Jeff..great visuals, but there's just not enough in the trailer to get a real sense of what the fim may possibly be about.....and I watched it 5 times to make sure.....It almosts seems as though you may be holding back not to reveal the plot......