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Colin Minihan · February 17th, 2004, 02:04 AM

hey guys, just finished this today... took 1 night to film, 2 days to edit..... hope you like it....LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK please.

3 formats available. "Not An Accident"

http://www.smiley-films.com/psa.html

Dustin Waits · February 17th, 2004, 08:35 AM

Wow. It's scary how real that is. Theres nothing that I hate more than drunk drivers. I liked the video. Really quick and to the point. Just like your last one "whats in your playground". Keep up the good work.

Dylan Couper · February 17th, 2004, 09:49 AM

ANother good piece Colin, although the flow of the edit after the girl gets smoked (nice!) by the car seems to be a little off pace. Also, possibly a little dark for web delivery.

I'd trim up the editing on the last few seconds, otherwise, very nice.

Bryan Mitchell · February 18th, 2004, 02:13 AM

It wasn't too dark on my monitor, but I think we have established that I may have the brightest one on the planet lol. Very nice psa once again. I thought the edit after the crash was a little off too. A minor fix there should make it great.

Colin Minihan · February 18th, 2004, 02:19 AM

fastinating.. what is it about the last part you do not like??? i ask only because i find this to be the most impacting way to cut it... and keep it 30 seconds long.

Bryan Mitchell · February 18th, 2004, 03:06 AM

At the 33 second mark, I would make the closeup last just a bit longer.... And actually, the more I watch it... on the 7th time now... It looks better and better. I suppose you could leave it alone. It looks pretty darn good. The more I watch it, the harder it is to find the place that I thought was off the first time. Wierd.

Colin Minihan · February 18th, 2004, 03:45 AM

yeah.. im just gonna leave it.. the only thing i would do if i had more time than 30 seconds.. is show the guy run out into the road towards her on that last angle with the flowers... and fade to black during that...

no biggy.

thanks for the feedback.

Dylan Couper · February 18th, 2004, 09:07 PM

Colin, I think I have a problem with the cut just before the flowers fall. I don't have the time to rewatch it right now.

Bob Safay · February 22nd, 2004, 06:22 AM

Colin, it was hard, it hit me hard. It really showed that it can all be gone in a blink of the eye. Almost to hard, but it sure as hell gets the message out. Oh, I watched it (and the other) several times and keep the end the way it is. VERY dramatic, and I did not think it to dark. Bob

Colin Minihan · February 22nd, 2004, 11:06 PM

glad u liked it!!!! now only if i could get it on tv somehow................

Terry Lyons · March 21st, 2004, 04:39 PM

Colin I thought it was great! I didn't see any problem at the end, although my monitor is a bit dark so maby I missed something. Good job!

Federico Prieto · April 9th, 2004, 05:52 PM

Excellent job mate.......well done!!!!

Congratulations

FP

Josh Brusin · April 9th, 2004, 08:02 PM

Well executed. "Girl gets hit by drunk driver" doesn't really say anything to me but it was well done.

February 17th, 2004, 02:04 AM	#1
Colin Minihan Regular Crew Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Canada, B.C Posts: 75	drunk driving psa hey guys, just finished this today... took 1 night to film, 2 days to edit..... hope you like it....LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK please. 3 formats available. "Not An Accident" http://www.smiley-films.com/psa.html

February 17th, 2004, 09:49 AM	#3
Dylan Couper Wrangler Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: Vancouver, British Columbia Posts: 8,314	ANother good piece Colin, although the flow of the edit after the girl gets smoked (nice!) by the car seems to be a little off pace. Also, possibly a little dark for web delivery. I'd trim up the editing on the last few seconds, otherwise, very nice. __________________ Need to rent camera gear in Vancouver BC? Check me out at camerarentalsvancouver.com

February 18th, 2004, 09:07 PM	#8
Dylan Couper Wrangler Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: Vancouver, British Columbia Posts: 8,314	Colin, I think I have a problem with the cut just before the flowers fall. I don't have the time to rewatch it right now. __________________ Need to rent camera gear in Vancouver BC? Check me out at camerarentalsvancouver.com

March 21st, 2004, 04:39 PM	#11
Terry Lyons Regular Crew Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Alta Sierra Posts: 182	Colin I thought it was great! I didn't see any problem at the end, although my monitor is a bit dark so maby I missed something. Good job! __________________ TAG

February 17th, 2004, 08:35 AM	#2
Dustin Waits Major Player Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Ft. Myers Beach, Fl Posts: 243	Wow. It's scary how real that is. Theres nothing that I hate more than drunk drivers. I liked the video. Really quick and to the point. Just like your last one "whats in your playground". Keep up the good work.

February 18th, 2004, 02:13 AM	#4
Bryan Mitchell Major Player Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Las Vegas Posts: 316	It wasn't too dark on my monitor, but I think we have established that I may have the brightest one on the planet lol. Very nice psa once again. I thought the edit after the crash was a little off too. A minor fix there should make it great.

February 18th, 2004, 02:19 AM	#5
Colin Minihan Regular Crew Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Canada, B.C Posts: 75	fastinating.. what is it about the last part you do not like??? i ask only because i find this to be the most impacting way to cut it... and keep it 30 seconds long.

February 18th, 2004, 03:06 AM	#6
Bryan Mitchell Major Player Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Las Vegas Posts: 316	At the 33 second mark, I would make the closeup last just a bit longer.... And actually, the more I watch it... on the 7th time now... It looks better and better. I suppose you could leave it alone. It looks pretty darn good. The more I watch it, the harder it is to find the place that I thought was off the first time. Wierd.

February 18th, 2004, 03:45 AM	#7
Colin Minihan Regular Crew Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Canada, B.C Posts: 75	yeah.. im just gonna leave it.. the only thing i would do if i had more time than 30 seconds.. is show the guy run out into the road towards her on that last angle with the flowers... and fade to black during that... no biggy. thanks for the feedback.

February 22nd, 2004, 06:22 AM	#9
Bob Safay Trustee Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 1,559	Colin, it was hard, it hit me hard. It really showed that it can all be gone in a blink of the eye. Almost to hard, but it sure as hell gets the message out. Oh, I watched it (and the other) several times and keep the end the way it is. VERY dramatic, and I did not think it to dark. Bob

February 22nd, 2004, 11:06 PM	#10
Colin Minihan Regular Crew Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Canada, B.C Posts: 75	glad u liked it!!!! now only if i could get it on tv somehow................

April 9th, 2004, 05:52 PM	#12
Federico Prieto Regular Crew Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: Caracas, Venezuela Posts: 117	Excellent job mate.......well done!!!! Congratulations FP

April 9th, 2004, 08:02 PM	#13
Josh Brusin Major Player Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Chicago, IL Posts: 439	Well executed. "Girl gets hit by drunk driver" doesn't really say anything to me but it was well done.