Short Film: "Peter vs Wild" at DVinfo.net

Tony Nguyen · February 3rd, 2009, 12:51 PM

Hey guys,
First video post! This short was made during a ski trip. We got bored at the cabin so ran out and did this in 1hr. Enjoy!

Tony Films

Some feedback would be nice. =)

Recorded settings:

XHA1
60i
Manual
60-120 shutter
No presets or CC
Vegas Pro 8.0

Brian Luce · February 3rd, 2009, 03:19 PM

Not to be rude, but it looks like it was shot in an hour, just as you said, without much planning. It's repetitive and too long. Bait the hook in the first 60 secs. Find better music. Good luck.

Tony Nguyen · February 3rd, 2009, 09:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Brian Luce

Not to be rude, but it looks like it was shot in an hour, just as you said, without much planning. It's repetitive and too long. Bait the hook in the first 60 secs. Find better music. Good luck.

Haha. I guess I forgot to mention that there was no planning and that this was for FUN! Can you refer me to some better music?

Here's one of my more serious work> http://www.tonyfilms.net/?cat=1
It was for my film class.

February 3rd, 2009, 12:51 PM	#1
Tony Nguyen Regular Crew Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 107	Short Film: "Peter vs Wild" Hey guys, First video post! This short was made during a ski trip. We got bored at the cabin so ran out and did this in 1hr. Enjoy! Tony Films Some feedback would be nice. =) Recorded settings: XHA1 60i Manual 60-120 shutter No presets or CC Vegas Pro 8.0

February 3rd, 2009, 03:19 PM	#2
Brian Luce Inner Circle Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 2,290	Not to be rude, but it looks like it was shot in an hour, just as you said, without much planning. It's repetitive and too long. Bait the hook in the first 60 secs. Find better music. Good luck.