New Trailer for short film "The Meeting" at DVinfo.net

Jay Kavi · December 16th, 2008, 08:57 PM

Trailer for my short currently being submitted to festivals.

The the story of a hookup that leaves a lasting impression on both people involved.

Vimeo

The Meeting on Vimeo

or youtube

YouTube - The Meeting - trailer

Shot on an HD100 and cut on FCP 6

would love feedback on this and the my other work @ myspace.com/thepegasuscompany or youtube.com/pegasuscompany

Cheers!

Alison Parker · January 4th, 2009, 03:16 AM

yo.. i liked the shots where the camera was pulling back from the person it was focused on..

but some of the other shots, not so much. like the first black and white shot of the guy sitting there and the camera pans from right to left.. the movement is not smooth at all..

and the part where it has some really quick cuts.. i was like, huh? not sure why you did that...

also not sure what the guy says out loud in the very beginning!

just some minor feedback, it is just a trailer after all... i am slightly intrigued about what this 'hook up' entails.. heh.

Jay Kavi · January 6th, 2009, 02:10 AM

All I told the editor was that i wanted a trailer with much dialog :)

The shot of guy sitting there ended up much choppier after I exported the trailer, I'm not sure why. Its also backward and slowed down, so is it wasn't 100% smooth to begin with.

Thanks for the feedback!

Jay Kavi · January 20th, 2009, 11:28 PM

FYI folks,

There's a high quality version on exposure room

The Meeting - Trailer By Sanjay Sooknanan On ExposureRoom

Feel free to add thepegasuscompany to exposureroom, vimeo, youtube or myspace!

Derrick A.Jones · January 28th, 2009, 07:06 PM

This was a nice trailer but i don't think i heard any voices at all. it was good all the way up until they started kissing! lol

j/k good trailer

Jay Kavi · January 29th, 2009, 07:40 PM

Ha! Thanks for the feedback Derrick. Maybe i should add a disclaimer :)

Jay Kavi · July 21st, 2009, 02:56 PM

Hey Folks,

The full film is now online. Watch, comment and repost if you like!!

Vimeo
The Meeting on Vimeo

Exposure Room
http://exposureroom.com/members/thep...ac8d00ec693aa/

Thanks in advance!

December 16th, 2008, 08:57 PM	#1
Jay Kavi Major Player Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: San Francisco, CA Posts: 243	New Trailer for short film "The Meeting" Trailer for my short currently being submitted to festivals. The the story of a hookup that leaves a lasting impression on both people involved. Vimeo The Meeting on Vimeo or youtube YouTube - The Meeting - trailer Shot on an HD100 and cut on FCP 6 would love feedback on this and the my other work @ myspace.com/thepegasuscompany or youtube.com/pegasuscompany Cheers!

January 4th, 2009, 03:16 AM	#2
Alison Parker Regular Crew Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Vancouver, BC Posts: 29	yo.. i liked the shots where the camera was pulling back from the person it was focused on.. but some of the other shots, not so much. like the first black and white shot of the guy sitting there and the camera pans from right to left.. the movement is not smooth at all.. and the part where it has some really quick cuts.. i was like, huh? not sure why you did that... also not sure what the guy says out loud in the very beginning! just some minor feedback, it is just a trailer after all... i am slightly intrigued about what this 'hook up' entails.. heh. __________________ Alison Parker (<----add me on Facebook!) Get Famous Productions - http://www.getfamousproductions.com

January 28th, 2009, 07:06 PM	#5
Derrick A.Jones Regular Crew Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: St. Petersburg,FL Posts: 94	This was a nice trailer but i don't think i heard any voices at all. it was good all the way up until they started kissing! lol j/k good trailer __________________ This is what i do for the love of Video Production.. Derrick Jones..........

January 6th, 2009, 02:10 AM	#3
Jay Kavi Major Player Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: San Francisco, CA Posts: 243	All I told the editor was that i wanted a trailer with much dialog :) The shot of guy sitting there ended up much choppier after I exported the trailer, I'm not sure why. Its also backward and slowed down, so is it wasn't 100% smooth to begin with. Thanks for the feedback!

January 20th, 2009, 11:28 PM	#4
Jay Kavi Major Player Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: San Francisco, CA Posts: 243	FYI folks, There's a high quality version on exposure room The Meeting - Trailer By Sanjay Sooknanan On ExposureRoom Feel free to add thepegasuscompany to exposureroom, vimeo, youtube or myspace!

January 29th, 2009, 07:40 PM	#6
Jay Kavi Major Player Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: San Francisco, CA Posts: 243	Ha! Thanks for the feedback Derrick. Maybe i should add a disclaimer :)

July 21st, 2009, 02:56 PM	#7
Jay Kavi Major Player Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: San Francisco, CA Posts: 243	Hey Folks, The full film is now online. Watch, comment and repost if you like!! Vimeo The Meeting on Vimeo Exposure Room http://exposureroom.com/members/thep...ac8d00ec693aa/ Thanks in advance!