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March 20th, 2008, 11:25 AM
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I thought that some of you might be interested in continuing our discussion of "wobbly" camerawork and "unmotivated zoom" here in a new thread...
http://www.dvinfo.net/conf/showthread.php?t=117432 |
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March 20th, 2008, 12:10 PM
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The only thing I would do differently
Hello Michael,
Very good job! I just watched your video, the only thing I would do differently is put the success stories up front. As a person of girth (meaning I am overweight) I was at first captivated by the commercial. but as I went on, I was looking at the people he was helping and they were already thin and beautiful. Even at five minutes, I started to get board with it-- however, when I saw the pictures at the end, I was like-- Hey! wish I lived in Delaware! Thats what made me think that inverting the order of the folks that he helped to the front would make a difference. Just a thought |
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March 22nd, 2008, 10:00 PM
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