Stills from my last couple shoots... feedback?

[Jason Boyce]

Hi guys, I've gotten some stills from my last couple of shoots and would love to get some feedback on how things are going. These were HVX's owned by others, although I have my own. The first set are from when we went to Ireland to shoot a documentary... everything was natural light & room light since our luggage was accidentally flown to Australia or something (we got them all shortly before we left). The second was in a club with a couple of Omnis and Totas... the band wanted to leave for a party so it was basically a fight just to get them to keep doing takes, I didn't get half the shots I planned for, but it turned out pretty well. I got to use my steadicam for the first time and a jib, so it was cool. I was the DP on both, not director so I didn't pick locations, content, or whatever, I just shot what I was told to shoot.

Ireland:

http://www.jasonboyce.com/pix/ireland_stills/sheep.jpg
http://www.jasonboyce.com/pix/ireland_stills/owen.jpg
http://www.jasonboyce.com/pix/ireland_stills/owen2.jpg
http://www.jasonboyce.com/pix/irelan...ls/protest.jpg
http://www.jasonboyce.com/pix/irelan...s/protest2.jpg
http://www.jasonboyce.com/pix/ireland_stills/road.jpg
http://www.jasonboyce.com/pix/irelan...ls/willie2.jpg

Da Club:

http://www.jasonboyce.com/pix/boreds...deoStill01.jpg
http://www.jasonboyce.com/pix/boreds...deoStill02.jpg
http://www.jasonboyce.com/pix/boreds...deoStill03.jpg
http://www.jasonboyce.com/pix/boreds...deoStill05.jpg
http://www.jasonboyce.com/pix/boreds...deoStill07.jpg
http://www.jasonboyce.com/pix/boreds...deoStill08.jpg
http://www.jasonboyce.com/pix/boreds...deoStill11.jpg

I bought my camera just over a year ago when I got in a car accident and totaled the car. It's my first camera and I've definitely been learning a lot since, both about how to use it and how to work with light.