30 Second Spot, please give feedback at DVinfo.net

David Nelson · May 19th, 2006, 07:13 PM

This will be the introduction for the video. I just wanted to look for feedback.
It will be a highlight video for a very the successful 9-0 Preble Football Team. Not done with it, just put a 30 second spot on it. In time It will be on my site. Please give feedback of what you think of it. Thanks

www.bigeyedeaproductions.com/PNL0506web.wmv

Bill Porter · May 19th, 2006, 08:11 PM

cool deal, nicely done!

David Nelson · May 19th, 2006, 08:16 PM

Was created with Adobe Photoshop, Apple Motion, Apple iMovie and Sonic Fire Pro for the music.

John Godden · May 19th, 2006, 08:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by David Nelson

Was created with Adobe Photoshop, Apple Motion, Apple iMovie and Sonic Fire Pro for the music.

nice
JohnG

Bill Hamell · May 21st, 2006, 07:59 AM

David,

First, very well done, now my comments…

I would make the comet less symmetrical so that the trailing edge blends more into the tail; I think that would look better.

At 00:00:23:30 and 00:0023:21 there are blank white frames before the blur starts I find this distracting if this is un intentional then please disregard. Going straight in to the blur would be better. Also doing a cross fade or a dissolve at that point would make it an easier transition from clip to clip due to the different framing of the shots then add your blur.

I like the overlay I think it says Northern Lights however due to the high contrast of the scene it is hard to read. Making that overlay clearer some how would make it stand out more. Maybe increase the brightness of the clip below or add a stroke the overlay mask so the letters stand out more.

All in all you have a great start here keep up the good work!

Bill

May 19th, 2006, 07:13 PM	#1
David Nelson Regular Crew Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Green Bay, WI Posts: 73	30 Second Spot, please give feedback This will be the introduction for the video. I just wanted to look for feedback. It will be a highlight video for a very the successful 9-0 Preble Football Team. Not done with it, just put a 30 second spot on it. In time It will be on my site. Please give feedback of what you think of it. Thanks www.bigeyedeaproductions.com/PNL0506web.wmv

May 21st, 2006, 07:59 AM	#5
Bill Hamell Major Player Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Mystic Ct. Posts: 477	David, First, very well done, now my comments… I would make the comet less symmetrical so that the trailing edge blends more into the tail; I think that would look better. At 00:00:23:30 and 00:0023:21 there are blank white frames before the blur starts I find this distracting if this is un intentional then please disregard. Going straight in to the blur would be better. Also doing a cross fade or a dissolve at that point would make it an easier transition from clip to clip due to the different framing of the shots then add your blur. I like the overlay I think it says Northern Lights however due to the high contrast of the scene it is hard to read. Making that overlay clearer some how would make it stand out more. Maybe increase the brightness of the clip below or add a stroke the overlay mask so the letters stand out more. All in all you have a great start here keep up the good work! Bill __________________ Cinematographers Bring Shadow To Light

May 19th, 2006, 08:11 PM	#2
Bill Porter Major Player Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Ventura, California, USA Posts: 751	cool deal, nicely done!

May 19th, 2006, 08:16 PM	#3
David Nelson Regular Crew Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Green Bay, WI Posts: 73	Was created with Adobe Photoshop, Apple Motion, Apple iMovie and Sonic Fire Pro for the music.