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7d & EX3 Short · August 26th, 2010, 07:11 PM

This is a short that I shot on the 7d and ex3. Hope you enjoy it. If you have any questions, comments or suggestions please leave them here or on vimeo.

Lee Tamer · September 22nd, 2010, 11:41 AM

Your shot composition/choices, and editing need some work but its a good start!

Justin Mitchell · September 22nd, 2010, 01:31 PM

Thanks Lee, any specifics you'd care to mention? I'm still trying to work on a final edit.

Lee Tamer · September 23rd, 2010, 09:14 AM

*The scene in the very beginning bother's me a little bit when he's walking into the next room, I wouldve done it handheld. Its a bit hard to tell where he was going

*When he sits down, the panning up to the birds eye view seemed awkward

*The scene where the next guy sits down is too long of a take, I would've also done that hand held.

Most of the shots seem static, and not much camera movement, next time I would do more panning and more following of the subject. The lack of camera movement is what really bothered me the most.

In general its hard to tell if there's a story or what it is

But thats my two cents, I'm not a perfect cinematographer either

Justin Mitchell · September 24th, 2010, 03:37 PM

Thanks, I do need to try to stop overusing static shots.

September 22nd, 2010, 11:41 AM	#2
Lee Tamer Regular Crew Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Ellicott City, MD Posts: 188	Your shot composition/choices, and editing need some work but its a good start!

September 22nd, 2010, 01:31 PM	#3
Justin Mitchell New Boot Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: United States Posts: 11	Thanks Lee, any specifics you'd care to mention? I'm still trying to work on a final edit.

September 23rd, 2010, 09:14 AM	#4
Lee Tamer Regular Crew Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Ellicott City, MD Posts: 188	The scene in the very beginning bother's me a little bit when he's walking into the next room, I wouldve done it handheld. Its a bit hard to tell where he was going When he sits down, the panning up to the birds eye view seemed awkward *The scene where the next guy sits down is too long of a take, I would've also done that hand held. Most of the shots seem static, and not much camera movement, next time I would do more panning and more following of the subject. The lack of camera movement is what really bothered me the most. In general its hard to tell if there's a story or what it is But thats my two cents, I'm not a perfect cinematographer either

September 24th, 2010, 03:37 PM	#5
Justin Mitchell New Boot Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: United States Posts: 11	Thanks, I do need to try to stop overusing static shots.