Villain

Dale Guthormsen · January 20th, 2011, 02:33 PM

Cole,

Ahh, now this story I fully understood. I really liked the idea that even a villian can be a victim of a villian.

The shakiness was a tad to much for me, however, in the opening scene it appeared that you wanted to put an edge on the film.

the shot under the table I could not distinguish if there was a gun or knife in hand, then the vertical shot of him looking kind of snied like was really good leaving the question of who was going to get who!!

Pretty darn well done, very enjoyable!!!

Look forward to seeing more of your work in the future!!!!

thank you for taking the time and sharining your work!!!

Cole Seidl · January 20th, 2011, 10:23 PM

Dale,
Thanks for the feedback. It really is very appreciated.

The shot under the table was indeed of a gun. (We did however struggle with that lighting. We didn't want to have it glowing unrealistically, but we wanted to see it.)

I'm very glad that you enjoyed it!

Thanks again for watching, and commenting.

January 20th, 2011, 02:33 PM	#16
Dale Guthormsen Inner Circle Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Saskatchewan Posts: 3,048	Cole, Ahh, now this story I fully understood. I really liked the idea that even a villian can be a victim of a villian. The shakiness was a tad to much for me, however, in the opening scene it appeared that you wanted to put an edge on the film. the shot under the table I could not distinguish if there was a gun or knife in hand, then the vertical shot of him looking kind of snied like was really good leaving the question of who was going to get who!! Pretty darn well done, very enjoyable!!! Look forward to seeing more of your work in the future!!!! thank you for taking the time and sharining your work!!! __________________ DATS ALL FOLKS Dale W. Guthormsen

January 20th, 2011, 10:23 PM	#17
Cole Seidl Regular Crew Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Minneapolis, MN Posts: 126	Dale, Thanks for the feedback. It really is very appreciated. The shot under the table was indeed of a gun. (We did however struggle with that lighting. We didn't want to have it glowing unrealistically, but we wanted to see it.) I'm very glad that you enjoyed it! Thanks again for watching, and commenting.