January 1st, 2007, 12:45 AM | #16 |
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To me the camera work looked pretty good and the music choice really helped set the mood.
For a first work that you submitted for judging and review I think you guys did good. The visuals worked, continuity and flow (which is really hard to make work in a 3 minute limit) went smoothly. Audio was mentioned by others, all I'll try to do is offer tips. If you're stuck with the onboard built in mic or are doing a voiceover try to boost the voice level in your editor. Don't know what you have available but some editors allow you to boost or reduce the audio track to some extent as needed. I assume you music track is separate and although you didn't have a music level problem here be aware that in future projects you want to insure your music does not overpower your other audio. Keep with it and I'll bet we see you guys come up with better and better stuff. I'm 68 now and would sure like to be able to go back to your age with the gear and opportunity we have now. Live it to the hilt, guys! Bruce Foreman |
January 1st, 2007, 06:07 PM | #17 |
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So…are there any LARPers who aren’t delusional to one degree or another? (I'm kidding, of course!) :)
That was lots of fun, Gabriel. Next time you’ll have that audio monster slain, and I’ll be able to laugh at lines like, “It was just us swinging our PVC sabers around in the street like the dorks we are.” LOL!!!
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lol, I think you are right, there is no larpers that are not delusional to one way or another. haha.
Thanks, Lorinda. That would be ideal. :) Quote:
Thanks everyone! ~Gabriel PS: I am trying to watch everyones videos and leave feedback to them all!
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January 1st, 2007, 11:25 PM | #19 |
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I really liked the idea of this one. I'm kind of a geek, not into larping but I definitely know that us engineer types can really get into big 'debates' on accurate details...
It was cool that you included this 'geek accuracy' as I'll call it in the memory section, I've found that to be true in my life!!! Haha, Very fun 10 points to the first person who adds 'light saber' effects to this one!!!* *points are not redeemable |
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January 2nd, 2007, 11:40 AM | #22 |
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Keep up the good work guys, then you guys can be the Yeager Bros. :P
Check out videocopilot.net if you haven't already...amongst the multitude of after effects tutorials there are some light saber tutorial videos that might intrigue you. |
January 5th, 2007, 08:38 AM | #23 |
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That was fun and for those of us out there that are real freaking old, we remember D&D and sitting up till about 3am rolling 20 sided dice. Been a long time since those days but I remember them.
Looks like you did have fun and you are learning. If you want to do this film and video thing for long, you'll notice you get much better really fast because of these little challenges. The fantastic prizes are a great bonus but we would probably all be here anyway, practicing and learning how to do all this better. Keep at it guys. You have a good start. Sean
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