DVC9 - Feng Shui - Dick Mays

Bruce Broussard · August 21st, 2007, 09:24 PM

This one made me really uncomfortable, maybe I don't like whipped guys either, or it just reminded me of my brothers!

For the amount of time we have, you really pulled the story off well. I liked the craziness of the neighbors, the accent stuff was really funny and added a lot to the film.

The audio at the end was a bit of an issue, but not too much; the guy was so whimpy that maybe we didn't deserve to hear what he said. By the way, I did understand "tonight, it's my turn". What character!

Jonathan Jones · August 22nd, 2007, 01:25 AM

I don't know how your mind works...but this was probably one of the most original concepts I've seen in a short.

It was extremely well shot with great use of angles and composition.

I loved the lines:
"Get off."

"I'm tryin'"

"No, get off me !"

Very funny.

Thanks for explaining the low dialoge earlier in the thread. I watched this several times and could never figure it out.

This was a clever piece of work.

-Jon

Dick Mays · August 23rd, 2007, 04:03 PM

Stacy, Marco, Bruce and Jon,

Thanks for the kind remarks. Except for Bruce who thinks Herve is whipped.

Just because a woman kicks you out of bed and makes you serve two men she is fllirting with drinks, that doesn't make you whipped. -- Does it?

Hummmm.....

August 22nd, 2007, 01:25 AM	#17
Jonathan Jones Trustee Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Healdsburg, California Posts: 1,138	I don't know how your mind works...but this was probably one of the most original concepts I've seen in a short. It was extremely well shot with great use of angles and composition. I loved the lines: "Get off." "I'm tryin'" "No, get off me !" Very funny. Thanks for explaining the low dialoge earlier in the thread. I watched this several times and could never figure it out. This was a clever piece of work. -Jon __________________ "Are we to go on record, sir, with our assertion that the 'pink hearts, yellow moons, orange stars, and green clovers' are, in point of fact', magically delicious?" - Walter Hollarhan before the House Subcommittee on Integrity in Advertising - May, 1974

August 21st, 2007, 09:24 PM	#16
Bruce Broussard Regular Crew Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Houston, TX Posts: 132	This one made me really uncomfortable, maybe I don't like whipped guys either, or it just reminded me of my brothers! For the amount of time we have, you really pulled the story off well. I liked the craziness of the neighbors, the accent stuff was really funny and added a lot to the film. The audio at the end was a bit of an issue, but not too much; the guy was so whimpy that maybe we didn't deserve to hear what he said. By the way, I did understand "tonight, it's my turn". What character!

August 23rd, 2007, 04:03 PM	#18
Dick Mays Major Player Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 690	Stacy, Marco, Bruce and Jon, Thanks for the kind remarks. Except for Bruce who thinks Herve is whipped. Just because a woman kicks you out of bed and makes you serve two men she is fllirting with drinks, that doesn't make you whipped. -- Does it? Hummmm.....