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December 19th, 2005, 01:07 AM
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New Boot
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Good Job
Good job Mike,
Your not too old, just keep your ideas fresh and rolling, and you will never age. The idea of having fresh ideas is evident in the time you took to create that excellent dolly move. Good job and keep learning for the next one. |
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December 19th, 2005, 04:03 AM
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Major Player
Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: Atlanta, GA
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I'm with Tyler. Gotta get a dolly. Love the dolly shot.
But I'm not a big fan of the subject matter. My father was an alcoholic, and would drink 20+ Lite beers/night. Brought back bad memories! But I suppose that is a compliment to the acting. Disturbing, but well done short. Good work, Mike. |
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December 19th, 2005, 11:06 AM
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Skyonic New York
Join Date: Nov 2001
Location: NYC
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i don't understand what the guy says on the cell phone at the end?
nice acting, nice shooting... |
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December 19th, 2005, 11:35 AM
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Robert, My son says, "Dad, I have been trying to call you since the funeral, is everything alright?" My response is, "Ya, ya I'm going to be alright." Thanks for the compliments. Mike
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December 20th, 2005, 09:39 AM
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Location: Rochester, NY
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Hhmmm
this was a bit of a downer for me... Nice story but way to long. Maybe even went past the time limit of 4 minutes? I think the story could have been told a bit different and been a bit better and shorter... Anyway nice job with the acting and camera work...
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