DVC3- "Flash"- Feedback

Jonathan Jones · September 21st, 2005, 06:53 PM

Hi Elvis,
This was a nice refreshing piece to view. It looked like it was shot as a real tv show, the set colors, the lighting, it all looked great. The interaction between the characters was well written "ha, the bear ate it."

I especially liked the kong loops, it made for a nice sound track. I liked it very much. Nice work. Great job.
-Jon

Tyler Baptist · September 21st, 2005, 10:34 PM

Great work. The cuts and acting were awesome, as was the effect with the creature. Very interesting idea. How did you create the creature by-the-way?

Jeff Sayre · September 22nd, 2005, 02:14 PM

Elvis:

I've just had the opportunity to begin watching the shorts from the past three days. I've watched one or two, but not yours.

Although I'm not a fan of crime-scene dramas ( I grew up with too much real crime to need anymore), I thoroughly enjoyed the tension you built up from the start. The it-was-a-bear misdirect was great!

I was half expecting someone to pick up her camera to see what she had been photographing but it was not clear to me if the camera she had been using was film or digital.

Light, blocking, cinematography all were convincing. Good Job!

September 21st, 2005, 06:53 PM	#16
Jonathan Jones Trustee Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Healdsburg, California Posts: 1,138	A very polished look Hi Elvis, This was a nice refreshing piece to view. It looked like it was shot as a real tv show, the set colors, the lighting, it all looked great. The interaction between the characters was well written "ha, the bear ate it." I especially liked the kong loops, it made for a nice sound track. I liked it very much. Nice work. Great job. -Jon __________________ "Are we to go on record, sir, with our assertion that the 'pink hearts, yellow moons, orange stars, and green clovers' are, in point of fact', magically delicious?" - Walter Hollarhan before the House Subcommittee on Integrity in Advertising - May, 1974

September 22nd, 2005, 02:14 PM	#18
Jeff Sayre Major Player Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: South Bend, IN Posts: 301	Elvis: I've just had the opportunity to begin watching the shorts from the past three days. I've watched one or two, but not yours. Although I'm not a fan of crime-scene dramas ( I grew up with too much real crime to need anymore), I thoroughly enjoyed the tension you built up from the start. The it-was-a-bear misdirect was great! I was half expecting someone to pick up her camera to see what she had been photographing but it was not clear to me if the camera she had been using was film or digital. Light, blocking, cinematography all were convincing. Good Job! __________________ www.SayreMedia.com

September 21st, 2005, 10:34 PM	#17
Tyler Baptist Regular Crew Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Saskatoon, SK Canada Posts: 71	Great work. The cuts and acting were awesome, as was the effect with the creature. Very interesting idea. How did you create the creature by-the-way?