Nature Near Washington D.C.

[Lino Miniello]

Hi Jonathan
excellent work! Very beautiful movie.
I know this music!
Bye bye my 'brother'...

Lino

[Steven Dempsey]

Jonathan,

Very nice piece of work, reminded me of some of my own stuff. I hate to be critical but I will offer this one piece of advice... Many of your shots were way too long in my opinion, particularly with the music. Maybe it's just me but there were a few instances where I just heard musical cues where I thought an edit should be. Anyway, that's just a personal thing and not to take away from the lovely camera work.

Keep it up :)

[Jonathan Gentry]

Thanks Steven

Yes the music was a bit of an afterthought. I had pieced the cuts and shots in the way I thought they flowed best visually and then threw the music over top. Then made a few adjustments to the lengths just to get the music and video to fit. I really threw it together pretty fast.

I may go back and do a second edit with more regard to the music.

Thanks for the good advice... I'll post back if I modify the edit.

-Jonathan

Originally Posted by Steven Dempsey

Jonathan,

Very nice piece of work, reminded me of some of my own stuff. I hate to be critical but I will offer this one piece of advice... Many of your shots were way too long in my opinion, particularly with the music. Maybe it's just me but there were a few instances where I just heard musical cues where I thought an edit should be. Anyway, that's just a personal thing and not to take away from the lovely camera work.

Keep it up :)

[Sam Ren]

Hey man this is some beautiful stuff.. i really like the fog in a couple of those scenes its really nice how the cam can capture that stuff so well...


-Sam~!