An Uncluttered World

Steven Dempsey · August 18th, 2008, 08:09 AM

Letus Ultimate and XHA1 combo. There are some pops in the vocal track which I need to fix.

Enjoy: An Uncluttered World By Steven Dempsey On ExposureRoom

Joseph Kassana · August 18th, 2008, 11:22 AM

Steven I am utterly speechless. I followed your work for sometime, so images aside the poetry along with it was utterly uplifting. Submit it as a short movie in a festival. Your 5 minutes is better than 1hour and half of utter dredge in the cinema.

Care to film some of my poetry.

Are you a fan of Terrence Mallick?

Steven Dempsey · August 18th, 2008, 11:38 AM

Thank you Joseph...

While I am flattered that you would like me to put images to your poetry, I think I might try to spend time with my own voice right now and see how that works out.

Terrence Malick is a god...Days of Heaven is right up there with my all time favorite movies in terms of cinematography, poetry and breadth of story.

Thanks for taking the time to comment, it means a lot.

Michael Chenoweth · August 18th, 2008, 11:46 AM

Steven,

As always... beautiful, engaging, stunning.

Great job and nice to see you have the chops for writing too ;)

cheno

Arnold Tersteeg · August 19th, 2008, 01:48 AM

Steven, one word wowwww !

Very good voice over.

Vinny Flood · August 19th, 2008, 01:55 AM

You just had to go and wreck living in London for me, didn't you?

That was great as always Steven and I really enjoyed the poetical narrative.

But do you think you'll be able to leave that life behind when Hollywood comes knocking on your door?

Jayson Corcoran · August 19th, 2008, 03:27 AM

Do you have a different link to the movie, ive done all I can to view it without luck.

Joseph Kassana · August 19th, 2008, 04:51 AM

Just a note Steven - who's poetry was that?

P.S. I am a published poet...

Paul Mailath · August 19th, 2008, 05:29 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Joseph Kassana

Just a note Steven - who's poetry was that?

P.S. I am a published poet...

not hard to work out if you read the comments on the site - very good steve, you made an old man cry. It was beautiful, touching, inspiring.

Steven Dempsey · August 19th, 2008, 07:35 AM

Thank you all...I really appreciate the comments. Joseph, the words are my own.

Jayson, it's also available on Vimeo: http://www.vimeo.com/1548796

Joseph Kassana · August 19th, 2008, 08:45 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Paul Mailath

not hard to work out if you read the comments on the site - very good steve, you made an old man cry. It was beautiful, touching, inspiring.

Love you too Paul.

If those are your own words Steve. I salute you sir.

J.J. Kim · August 26th, 2008, 02:08 PM

Beau-Ti-Ful!
I am a big fan of your work, and this is as great as other works.
Very inspiring.
Good Job!

JJ

Morgan Crossley · August 27th, 2008, 10:19 PM

Very pretty.

Preset and Lenses used?

Andrew Slankard · September 11th, 2008, 04:52 PM

I know this has been posted for a while, but I wanted to leave my comment anyway. That was beautiful in every sense of the word. I loved that poem - I quoted a piece of it on my Facebook :-P . The overall composition of your short convinced me even that much more to go for an Ultimate, and it looked fantastic with your XH. In a way, it reminded me a lot of the intro to Finding Forrester. Great job Steven, great job!

August 18th, 2008, 08:09 AM	#1
Steven Dempsey Disjecta Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Seattle, Washington Posts: 937	An Uncluttered World - XHA1/Letus Ultimate Letus Ultimate and XHA1 combo. There are some pops in the vocal track which I need to fix. Enjoy: An Uncluttered World By Steven Dempsey On ExposureRoom __________________ Try my Digital Therapy: http://www.pinelakefilms.com/digital_therapy.html Films on ExposureRoom: http://exposureroom.com/members/disjecta.aspx/videos/

August 18th, 2008, 11:38 AM	#3
Steven Dempsey Disjecta Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Seattle, Washington Posts: 937	Thank you Joseph... While I am flattered that you would like me to put images to your poetry, I think I might try to spend time with my own voice right now and see how that works out. Terrence Malick is a god...Days of Heaven is right up there with my all time favorite movies in terms of cinematography, poetry and breadth of story. Thanks for taking the time to comment, it means a lot. __________________ Try my Digital Therapy: http://www.pinelakefilms.com/digital_therapy.html Films on ExposureRoom: http://exposureroom.com/members/disjecta.aspx/videos/

August 19th, 2008, 01:48 AM	#5
Arnold Tersteeg New Boot Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Landgraaf Nederland Posts: 23	Steven, one word wowwww ! Very good voice over. __________________ Canon XH-a1 user & Edius NX Canopus

August 19th, 2008, 01:55 AM	#6
Vinny Flood Regular Crew Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: London Posts: 51	You just had to go and wreck living in London for me, didn't you? That was great as always Steven and I really enjoyed the poetical narrative. But do you think you'll be able to leave that life behind when Hollywood comes knocking on your door? __________________ The Brown Cow Project http://www.browncowproject.com

August 19th, 2008, 07:35 AM	#10
Steven Dempsey Disjecta Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Seattle, Washington Posts: 937	Thank you all...I really appreciate the comments. Joseph, the words are my own. Jayson, it's also available on Vimeo: http://www.vimeo.com/1548796 __________________ Try my Digital Therapy: http://www.pinelakefilms.com/digital_therapy.html Films on ExposureRoom: http://exposureroom.com/members/disjecta.aspx/videos/

August 18th, 2008, 11:22 AM	#2
Joseph Kassana Regular Crew Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: London Posts: 92	Steven I am utterly speechless. I followed your work for sometime, so images aside the poetry along with it was utterly uplifting. Submit it as a short movie in a festival. Your 5 minutes is better than 1hour and half of utter dredge in the cinema. Care to film some of my poetry. Are you a fan of Terrence Mallick?

August 18th, 2008, 11:46 AM	#4
Michael Chenoweth Regular Crew Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Sandy, Utah Posts: 128	Steven, As always... beautiful, engaging, stunning. Great job and nice to see you have the chops for writing too ;) cheno

August 19th, 2008, 03:27 AM	#7
Jayson Corcoran Regular Crew Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Barnt Green, England Posts: 76	Do you have a different link to the movie, ive done all I can to view it without luck.

August 19th, 2008, 04:51 AM	#8
Joseph Kassana Regular Crew Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: London Posts: 92	Just a note Steven - who's poetry was that? P.S. I am a published poet...

August 26th, 2008, 02:08 PM	#12
J.J. Kim Major Player Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Wheeling, IL Posts: 270	Beau-Ti-Ful! I am a big fan of your work, and this is as great as other works. Very inspiring. Good Job! JJ

August 27th, 2008, 10:19 PM	#13
Morgan Crossley Regular Crew Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Rhode Island Posts: 113	Very pretty. Preset and Lenses used?

September 11th, 2008, 04:52 PM	#14
Andrew Slankard Regular Crew Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: California Posts: 65	I know this has been posted for a while, but I wanted to leave my comment anyway. That was beautiful in every sense of the word. I loved that poem - I quoted a piece of it on my Facebook :-P . The overall composition of your short convinced me even that much more to go for an Ultimate, and it looked fantastic with your XH. In a way, it reminded me a lot of the intro to Finding Forrester. Great job Steven, great job!