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December 10th, 2007, 06:32 PM
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Tell Me What You Think!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KvAJagtoT6w
Post here too just for category reasons. Constructive Criticism needed=D
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December 10th, 2007, 08:02 PM
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You need a light kit.
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December 10th, 2007, 08:17 PM
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Yea, i shot this with the canon a1 and i think a total of 20 dollars of those metal construction lights, bulbs included! =D
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December 10th, 2007, 08:41 PM
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I think you did a great job, some people dig low light, high contrast lighting.
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December 10th, 2007, 11:08 PM
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Not sure low light and high contrast go together
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December 10th, 2007, 11:44 PM
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Thanks, yea i liked the look, even my photographs in lightroom i bump up the blacks. I like the look, kinda like a deep thinking thing. idk guess its just the style, but yea planning on getting a light kit anyways.=D
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December 11th, 2007, 12:15 AM
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I like it. Run with whatever style you feel best portrays what you are trying to convey to the audience. That's what it's all about - not lighting everything perfectly using 3 point lighting - it's about conveying the emotion YOU want to convey. :) Enjoy your own, unique, style. :D
Carl
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December 11th, 2007, 12:38 AM
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I thought the lighting was good.
The only problem I had with it is that it didn't really had an ending. I know it was like based off of A Beautiful Mind (lol the music doesn't give it away or anything), but there wasn't really an ending. |
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December 11th, 2007, 05:16 PM
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hahaha well in fact there was an ending, it just wasn't very obvious. No one in my family got it either. hahahah it was just a really extensive decisions on a ttic tac toe move =)
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December 11th, 2007, 11:02 PM
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I totally agree with Carl. I had no problems with the lighting... actually, I liked it. Use a light kit when the mood calls for it.
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December 12th, 2007, 02:58 PM
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Yea, the light looked really cool. I hate when low-budget films try and light everything... It looks really fake.
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December 13th, 2007, 12:08 AM
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Hi Loren,
Just thought I'd throw in my two cents. I liked the look of it. I especially liked your shot composition. All except for that last two-shot.. which I thought didn't match the artistic framing choices of the other shots. Overall, a nice little piece. There. There's my two cents. |
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December 13th, 2007, 11:31 PM
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Thanks to all =) Advice taken to thought and compliments very appreciated =)
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