Does this one work?

http://www.stickypod.com/stickypod_u...Unfinished.avi

blinding Color (3 min short)
 

My wife and I wrote this short spoken word piece -- feel free to check it out at http://www.centerstreetproductions.c...ingcolor.shtml .

It's all still photographs edited in photoshop and then dumped into Final Cut Pro and given motion vectors there.

Thanks for looking! Let me know what you think.

if you can't get that to work, I posted it on google video too:

http://video.google.com/videoplay?do...74443032987157

Need some criticism on these scenes
 

Hello all,

Here is a doc Ie been working on. This is a few scenes in the first 30 minutes. Id like to hear any opinions on the story and flow and any other criticisms you may have.

http://www.streamload.com/behindforg..._Sequences.mov

thanks!

It got tough for me to read the captions at the bottom. Are you planning on turning that into a VO?

yeah, the subtitles are small and havent been edited, also the yellow will be VO.

No response
 

Lots of hits on this but people arent saying much...is it that bad?

I dont think its a bad thing. Its a long video that not a lot of people are going to have time to watch. I watched the first 10 minutes and then paged through the rest. I dont know where this will be showing, if its a PBS kind of showing, the pacing isnt too bad. If its got a different type of dist channel, I'd definately think about picking up the pacing. Also, there wasnt a ton that grabbed me in the beginning and made me want to really find out what was going on. Maybe look to nail your sinker quicker to get me hooked. I'd also maybe pick up the pacing slightly regardless in some areas just to continue to keep the viewer on their toes. Take all that with a grain of salt of course. I was trying to watch this on the job so I dont exactly have a ton of time ;)

Short Trailer
 

Teaser for documentary short shot on FX1:

http://www.walkrobins.com/files/datinghabitstrailer.mov

How long until thats done... definately interested in seeing that. How are you shooting? As is do you have a lot of action mixed in with the interviews? That could be a really funny one, maybe you should pitch that to MTV, I could see something like that at least having a conceptual chance on M2 - HA

I just finished it, actually. It's 12 minutes long, all interview footage. We were at a crossroads of whether to mix action with the interviews and make it a much longer piece with a narrative or stay short at a (hopefully) engaging length. We decided what we wanted to say could come across on a short length and remain engaging despite the prospect of 12 minutes of interviews. I'll be putting the whole thing up probably here in the next day or two.

Also, if you follow college football, several of the guys are freshmen on OU's football team that I'm sure you'll be hearing about over the next few years. They're awesome guys.

I like it . the music went really well with the scenes.

award winning video
 

Hi Guys,

This is a narrative music video a did some time ago that won a couple of film festivals in Spain and Portugal.

http://eventos01.wanadoo.es/Low%20Radiation.wmv

Note: it is very very very very compressed for the net

That was fun stuff... ha! What did you shoot on?

G'day Ryan,

Overall nice job mate, enjoyed watching it...

I've also thought about putting a wireless mic on our football players here in Oz but since our guys wear no padding, it would almost be guaranteed the mic would get damaged in tackles... www.afl.com.au

I reckon using 2 cameras would make this even better, having one constantly following the player with wireless mic, even when hes on the sidelines to get his reactions, cheers, etc & one camera following the game/ball....