Cole,

Ahh, now this story I fully understood. I really liked the idea that even a villian can be a victim of a villian.

The shakiness was a tad to much for me, however, in the opening scene it appeared that you wanted to put an edge on the film.

the shot under the table I could not distinguish if there was a gun or knife in hand, then the vertical shot of him looking kind of snied like was really good leaving the question of who was going to get who!!

Pretty darn well done, very enjoyable!!!

Look forward to seeing more of your work in the future!!!!

thank you for taking the time and sharining your work!!!

Dale,
Thanks for the feedback. It really is very appreciated.

The shot under the table was indeed of a gun. (We did however struggle with that lighting. We didn't want to have it glowing unrealistically, but we wanted to see it.)

I'm very glad that you enjoyed it!

Thanks again for watching, and commenting.