Egads, after NAB, I have a lot of catching up to do with my forum reading. Thanks for the further comments, everyone. Sean, funny that you mentioned Labryinth -- I used that as reference point for my actors to get a feel for what I was shooting for.

I wish I spent more time on this short. I think I could've done a lot more with it if spent longer than a day filming it. That's why the pacing is kinda wonky.