Re: DVC22 - Shattered - Dick Mays & Roxzane Mims
 

Thanks ya'll for the kinds words. Toni, I am so going to rip off your great visual of the shoe. I need that when the man picks up the girls shoe and heads through the bushes. I will reshoot that, as it is unclear that he picks up a shoe. I am also going to change the music, and add a couple of scenes and then repost for those of you interested in seeing the longer piece.

Yes, the there were audio issues, and I had to try to minimize car noise, and the noise reduction process left some voices sounding odd. Sigh. Audio is so frickin hard...

Re: DVC22 - Shattered - Dick Mays & Roxzane Mims
 

Just one reason I don't do these anymore. If you don't have a good mic and recorder and a good boom handler it's pretty tough, let alone outside noise.

Looking forward to the re-edit, Dick. It's sad, yet, actually a sweet piece; I saw Rox's influence throughout. About the guy being creepy, the first time I watched it I kind of felt that way, but thought he dispelled it quickly through his kind actions (like mowing the area). Besides, a guy who is nice to cats has to get some benefit of doubt. The most tension for me came from that dirty sink...boy, was I glad when he cleaned it!

Re: DVC22 - Shattered - Dick Mays & Roxzane Mims
 

I'm totally looking forward to the updated long version!

By the way, well done on the AE work with the bushes and car. I had no idea. And even knowing now what you did, those scenes in the beginning look real. Bravo!