This one made me really uncomfortable, maybe I don't like whipped guys either, or it just reminded me of my brothers!

For the amount of time we have, you really pulled the story off well. I liked the craziness of the neighbors, the accent stuff was really funny and added a lot to the film.

The audio at the end was a bit of an issue, but not too much; the guy was so whimpy that maybe we didn't deserve to hear what he said. By the way, I did understand "tonight, it's my turn". What character!

I don't know how your mind works...but this was probably one of the most original concepts I've seen in a short.

It was extremely well shot with great use of angles and composition.

I loved the lines:
"Get off."

"I'm tryin'"

"No, get off me !"

Very funny.

Thanks for explaining the low dialoge earlier in the thread. I watched this several times and could never figure it out.

This was a clever piece of work.

-Jon

Stacy, Marco, Bruce and Jon,

Thanks for the kind remarks. Except for Bruce who thinks Herve is whipped.

Just because a woman kicks you out of bed and makes you serve two men she is fllirting with drinks, that doesn't make you whipped. -- Does it?

Hummmm.....