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Mark Dawson
May 11th, 2008, 11:46 AM
You can change – Shot on the South Bank - London. This was unplanned short and my thanks go to Philip Bloom one for his cameo appearances but also allowing me to tag along this day. We had a few permission problems with security but they were resolved which then allowed limited access to shoot so both he and I took advantage. Set to the music of ‘Bitter Sweet Symphony’ by The Verve. Thank you also to everyone for their support on my last short If I lay here – Enjoy this one the next is in pre-production.

can be found under the films section at www.londonmarkfilms.co.uk

Steve Ellington
May 12th, 2008, 06:56 AM
A fun little video I made about a week ago

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U0FlWrxLf5o


Shot on a Z1

Enjoy

Sami Hakkinen
May 12th, 2008, 11:12 AM
Okay, the film is finished and it's available to download from the movies website: http://silentpaprika.kapsi.fi/evil

It would be fun to hear some comments and critique

John De Rienzo
May 12th, 2008, 01:32 PM
Whilst on Holiday my Wife got over excited with taking stills on her new nokia, so I captured most of it ,added extra footage, and made this!

Any thoughts, comments, on filming and editing appreciated.

Thank you.

http://www.derienzo-videoproductions.co.uk/nokia.wmv

Jack Zhang
May 13th, 2008, 01:25 AM
http://www.vimeo.com/1007932

Shot July 30th, 2007.

This place is close to the epicenter of the recent 7.9 earthquake, where 900 students died when a school collapsed. This footage might serve as a archive if the structures are no longer there anymore.

Shot in 60i on a HC7, post-processed via interpolate de-interlacing to 60p then slowing it down to 48p and discarding one frame to end up at 24p.

Richard Gooderick
May 13th, 2008, 01:35 AM
The music is beautiful.
It's very sad to think of all those people who have just died or are struggling to survive as we speak.

Jack Zhang
May 13th, 2008, 03:36 AM
It's very hard, considering I went there last summer to shoot this video. One featured video of the quake on YouTube originates from my hometown in Wuhan, China where a highrise was entirely evacuated.

Andzei Matsukevits
May 13th, 2008, 10:39 AM
finally i got done with it, some of you might have seen the trailer: http://youtube.com/watch?v=BdQJCvXSfbo

you can download the movie from here: http://fff.ee/fff/Piriplatoo/


also some of my older extreme sports projects are located here: fff.ee/fff

Dylan Pank
May 14th, 2008, 02:26 AM
the 2008 Portsmouth Film Festival (http://www.portsmouthscreen.org.uk) is looking for short films by film and video makers based in Hampshire, West sussex and the Isle of Wight. For the past three years we have showcased the work of local production talent as part of the Portsmouth Screen: Film and New Media Festival. For 2008, We are looking for entertaining, engaging and thought provoking films in any genre, from drama to comedy, documentary to animation.

The deadline for submissions is 31 July 2008. Films should not be longer than 15 minutes, including credits. At least one of the principle cast, or the writer, director or producer should reside or study in Hampshire, West Sussex or the Isle of Wight, or the film should have been produced in this area.

This year, the screening will be held at the famous King's Theatre (http://www.kings-southsea.com"), Albert Road, Southsea. The screening will take place on Sunday 31st August at 7:30pm. The selected films can also be shown as part of subsequent Portsmouth Screen events during the Portsmouth Screen Festival and other events later in the year.

Please go to the Shorts::Cut website (http://www.portsmouthscreen.org.uk/shorts/index.html) for rules of entry and to download a submission form.

Herminio Cordido
May 16th, 2008, 02:41 PM
I Finished a 8 minutes short film on free flying:

"Because..."
http://because.flyozone.com/

Comments and feedback would be appreciated.

Thanks

Herminio

Luke Springer
May 16th, 2008, 03:27 PM
I really liked it... nice camera work too. What was it shot with?

Luke

Herminio Cordido
May 16th, 2008, 04:11 PM
It was shot with a Sony Z1u, 50i, deinterlaced in post, Magic Bullet Color Correction, output PAL sd from After effects.

Dennis Murphy
May 16th, 2008, 11:23 PM
That was fascinating and poetic.
Loved it.

Nate Haustein
May 16th, 2008, 11:42 PM
Hey all, I just finished a short film for my American History class. Shot in 2 days and edited in 2 sleepless nights mere hours before the deadline. I liked how it turned out though; it was something different and a lot of fun. Used an XHA1 with magic bullet looks in FCP.

Not perfect I know, as crew was somewhat nonexistent, but some comments would be welcome, more so in the areas of shot composition, editing, storytelling and the general flow. I'm always looking for ways to improve my work. Also, actors were members of the class, so no real 'actors' here, though some of us like to think so!

Enjoy-

http://www.vimeo.com/1022932

Paul Kellett
May 17th, 2008, 10:28 AM
Brilliant !!

Paul.

Andy Tejral
May 17th, 2008, 12:45 PM
Well, it is great for a student film. I wish I had access to equipment like this when I was starting out (we fought for time on the cuts only 3/4" bays).

The story, the acting and the editing are fine. I like the sense of mystery you created.

My only complaint would be the anachronistic elements. The highway, the heater and electrical panel. I don't know what you were dealing with but if you could have adjusted your shots, maybe you could have removed them from the scenes?

But overall, really great work!

Nate Haustein
May 17th, 2008, 12:46 PM
thanks!

Well, things are always a work in progress. It's been suggested that I add short flash dissolves before and after flashbacks/character histories. Yay or nay? Is the washed out color enough already for people to tell that its a different time?

Oh, and I'm kinda lying about the "HD," I found that SD uprezzed to 720[ looks better on vimeo than the SD version. Sorry to decieve!

What else is fixable?

Nate Haustein
May 17th, 2008, 01:09 PM
The highway, the heater and electrical panel. I don't know what you were dealing with but if you could have adjusted your shots, maybe you could have removed them from the scenes?



Yeah, a real bummer now that it's done. When I started I didn't have any real plans to take the time to make this a quality piece. I was stressed out and low on time so I was just going to kinda do it "good enough." After we got the footage though, I realized just how much I liked some of the performances and the script in general.

Highway really does take away from the whole experience, but the "saloon" location was to good to pass up (especially with a sub-$30 budget)- no way to avoid those cars though, that's a freeway in the background! We shot that scene first, and after that things like the electrical box and heater seemed kinda trivial if the highway was in the first shot. You're correct that I should have been able to frame them out however.

If I learned one thing from this production is that I guess I don't do things "good enough." I'm in it for the production no matter what. Would have liked a boom on the shoot, and an operator for that matter; also lights might have added some, also, more tripod shots; I think I did the whole thing handheld- cept for the last shot where Kit is walking away through the bodies, someone else had to do that one *wince* cause I had to play dead!

Andy Tejral
May 17th, 2008, 06:22 PM
Highway really does take away from the whole experience,

I wonder if you can blur the highway to make it less noticeable.

Would have liked a boom on the shoot, and an operator for that matter; also lights might have added some, also, more tripod shots; I think I did the whole thing handheld- cept for the last shot where Kit is walking away through the bodies, someone else had to do that one *wince* cause I had to play dead!

Shhh! Don't be apologizing for that stuff! The audio was quite adequate. Some dialog was a little lower which you can bring up but overall not bad. I did notice some camera bobble but not too bad. Having said that, if ya got sticks, use 'em! The lighting was adequate too.

I did find one fairly major problem with your script though: this website, http://www.nps.gov/gosp/ states the spike was driven on May 10, 1869, although I read somewhere else it was May 15. So I'm not sure what the actual date was.

Its good work that you should be proud of. Now you know what to look for on your next attempt!

Paulo Teixeira
May 18th, 2008, 08:11 PM
I just uploaded this exact file to Vimeo
http://vimeo.com/1032267

Herminio Cordido
May 19th, 2008, 10:00 AM
Thanks for the comments guys!

Cheers

Herminio

Giuseppe Pugliese
May 20th, 2008, 12:21 AM
this had such great music in it, and i really enjoyed it. Great job! so different... it was awesome!

Alex Wren
May 20th, 2008, 04:25 AM
Hi Everyone,

This is a music profile video we were asked to put together for a local acoustic guitarist/songwriter. The idea was to give viewers an insight into the artist whilst showcasing the song 'Find Yourself'.

The video is to be placed on the artist's web site as well as sent out on DVD as part of a promotional pack.

So far everybody is very happy with the rough cut. We still need to run it through After Effects for proper scaling, colour grading and other tweaks/fixes.

http://www.wrenpod.net/dancrisp/preview.mov

I would love to hear any feedback if possible.

Many thanks

Alex

Richard Gooderick
May 20th, 2008, 05:13 AM
It's quite difficult to do this kind of thing well but this basically works.

There was a technical problem with the sound. It was breaking up or clipping badly for the first half.

I don't know who the other two musicians are. I suppose they will be captioned.

My main suggestion would be not to jump around so much. I wasn't too sure about the shots of him singing on the beach. They might have been more convincing if he had a guitar with him.

Overall my guess is that it might work even better if there was more of a central performance on which to hang the other bits. I got the impression sometimes that the film was skipping around because you were worried that the audience might get bored. If this is true I think you can have more faith in the material/performance.

There's lots of ways to do this kind of thing. I'm just finishing off five films in a similar vein right now. I've been grappling with similar issues and these comments on your film are just first reactions. Hopefully they are useful on that basis.

Alex Wren
May 20th, 2008, 05:39 AM
Thanks Richard, yes your comments are most welcome.

There was a technical problem with the sound. It was breaking up or clipping badly for the first half.

Strange, it plays ok when i just tested it. I will have a go from some other machines. What platform/player are you using?

I don't know who the other two musicians are. I suppose they will be captioned.

Yes, I was going to do this during the AE phase. Otherwise it will all get nastily squashed when I scale it down.

My main suggestion would be not to jump around so much. I wasn't too sure about the shots of him singing on the beach. They might have been more convincing if he had a guitar with him.

I think after shooting 5 tapes you get to the stage where you think you have everything. In the end it turns out that you end up substituting shots for ones that work (i.e. correct part of song) for ones that you prefer. I kind of agree with you but I suppose that is all part of the learning curve...

Overall my guess is that it might work even better if there was more of a central performance on which to hang the other bits. I got the impression sometimes that the film was skipping around because you were worried that the audience might get bored. If this is true I think you can have more faith in the material/performance.

The locations were pretty much chosen by the client. I was worried that people might think that we were skipping around, however reactions so far have been very positive so hopefully this is not too apparent.

There's lots of ways to do this kind of thing. I'm just finishing off five films in a similar vein right now. I've been grappling with similar issues and these comments on your film are just first reactions. Hopefully they are useful on that basis.

Yes very useful thanks. I wouldn't have posted it here if I was afraid of anybodys comments. I shall pass all the comments back to the team involved and hopefully they will all help.

Thanks for all your comments.

Richard Gooderick
May 21st, 2008, 03:29 AM
Hi Alex

i just tried again and it played back fine. Must have been a glitch somewhere.

I pressgang friends into looking at rough cuts. It takes a thick skin but I'm sure the result is better because of it!

Good luck with the rest of the edit.

Kevin Spahr
May 21st, 2008, 06:36 PM
Here is a little music video using a song written and performed by my wife that was shot in May 2008. It conveys the feeling of the Fairie Festival pretty well....

http://youtube.com/watch?v=nNYXnaQg4Gs

btw, try the high quality link it really makes a difference

thanks for watching

Jay Gladwell
May 22nd, 2008, 10:45 AM
What is that instrument she's playing? Looks like some type if inverted steel drum.

Kevin Spahr
May 22nd, 2008, 11:10 AM
It's called a Hang (pronounced hung) and it is made by PanART.
If you go to http://hang-music.com you can find out more than you want to know.

Steven Dempsey
May 22nd, 2008, 11:33 AM
See it here:

http://exposureroom.com/members/disjecta.aspx/assets/42c6e0e5295f4f91ab8b7d1e3671df90/?em=View

Mike Flynn
May 22nd, 2008, 03:55 PM
Awesome, that is a really great park!

I have to ask, even at the risk of sounding like a total newbie...are you just cropping the height of your video in post and framing accordingly when you shoot to get the super wide cinematic aspect ratio?

Mark Williams
May 22nd, 2008, 05:48 PM
Looks like a nice place to visit and you captured some beautiful memories. When the wave hit the log on the beach and the camera went haywire was that planned or for real. Looked like you almost got a dunking.

Kevin Myhre
May 22nd, 2008, 09:38 PM
Wow. Let me just say your work always inspires me. I only wish you lived closer so you could take me under your wing and teach me how to actually use this camera. I do have one okay two questions for you. First what settings do you use for your low light situations? All of your work has almost no grain that I can see. I'm about to start filming a horror movie for some people ( I know probably not your foray) and some of it is supposed to be pretty dark. When I try this even with gain turned down I get a lot of grain. Okay my other question is what sticks you use when you're out and about. I have a decent ( in my opinion) set but there fairly heavy and a pain to carry around. Just curious

Nick Williams
May 23rd, 2008, 12:50 AM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M8AbsFVVrKg

check this out

nickfilms.com
star wars fan film

Dennis Murphy
May 23rd, 2008, 08:57 AM
May the force be up you.

Christian Nachtrieb
May 24th, 2008, 08:17 AM
This year, my university held it's 2nd World's Largest Soccer Game in tribute to our president stepping down after 20 years of service. This video was dedicated to him and all his hard work over the years.

Here is the link to the full video, estimated run time is about 18 minutes.. shot exclusively on Canon XH-A1, with a Rode NTG-1 shotgun mic. No artificial lighting was used, and it was just a one man job.

http://www.theamazinghouse.com/work/INDEX.html

It's in flash format, so I would let the video get close to finishing before you play it, otherwise it might be a little choppy while it downloads.

Feedback welcome, thanks everybody!

Christian N.

Marcel D. Van Someren
May 24th, 2008, 08:49 AM
Christian,

Nice piece.

Can you tell us a little about the camera set up? Did you shoot in 60i? Did you use a custom Preset? And, what did you use to encode the footage to flash? I've been trying to get some of my footage encoded to flash but haven't been able to achieve that quality that you did..

Thanks,

Christian Nachtrieb
May 24th, 2008, 09:22 AM
Oh right, sorry. I shot all in 24p and I believe the preset I used was derived from the DVX100 look-a-like preset, I just tweaked it a little myself.

This was my first time encoding right to flash, but basically what I did was export my timeline from FCP and imported that into Sorensen Squeeze. I then set the flash settings in there, I think I set the average bitrate to about 1600 and then manually set the dimensions.

It came out a little larger (file size) than what I was hoping but it is 18 minutes, nothing really you can do about that, because I wanted to keep the quality.

Jimmy Moss
May 24th, 2008, 11:11 PM
I thought it was really well edited, nice flow, told the story. Only thing I would add would be some more music during some of the silent parts. It would get the viewer a little more excited about it, I think. Watch some docs and notice how they fade the music in and out when people talk. Great work.

Andzei Matsukevits
May 25th, 2008, 02:43 AM
thanks man!

i tried to choose songs, which most people will like :)

Morgan Crossley
May 25th, 2008, 10:53 AM
anywhere else we can view this? don't really want to have to install the new flash player right now....

Steven Dempsey
May 25th, 2008, 01:34 PM
http://www.vimeo.com/1050933

You may still need the Flash player although you can download the original Quicktime.

Morgan Crossley
May 25th, 2008, 01:49 PM
thanks. Vimeo works fine but that other site you first posted wants me to download the "latest version of Adobe Flash"

Clarice Starling
May 25th, 2008, 10:14 PM
hi everyone..this is my sample video..
shoot last week..

http://www.vimeo.com/1065930

Marcel D. Van Someren
May 25th, 2008, 11:07 PM
The video is "protected" so we can't view it.

Clarice Starling
May 25th, 2008, 11:49 PM
problem solved..

Ocean Zen
May 26th, 2008, 10:42 AM
The Tunnel - A Short Film by Ocean Zen
Hope this is the right forum to show a short. This is my final Uni project filmed with the Canon HV20, and Raynox wide angle lens (660? can't remember)

Effects and colour correction done in After Effects. Edited with Final Cut Pro

Check it out here. -
http://www.revver.com/video/910363/t...-by-ocean-zen/

or HD version with better audio here
http://www.vimeo.com/1053489

Synopsis
This short film explores the power of the mind and it's infinite ability to create our surroundings and experiences. The use of Hyper-Real Sound Design, intense music and heightened visuals take the audience on a journey from life to death, or is the whole experience a vivid hallucination?

Paul Kellett
May 26th, 2008, 11:24 AM
Very good Ocean.
I especially like the camera angles on the steps.
If you're ever over the west country way then let me now,i like to work with you.

Paul.

Ocean Zen
May 26th, 2008, 11:49 AM
Thanks mate :)

Viimar Lindau
May 26th, 2008, 01:38 PM
As all sort of car shows seem to be very popular here, then here is mine covering Motorshow 2008 which took place in Tallinn, Estonia.
For some shots I used tripod and some are hand held. Regarding preset I'm in trouble because I don't remember which preset I used. Shame. I guess it was Panalook2, but not sure about that.
No any color correction in post.

http://exposureroom.com/members/vimps.aspx/assets/06d5b2e1f4b04b638605b21af364093d/