Heres a couple of my commercials. They're short so you don't have to spend hours watching these. Comments please! (Some were shot with my old regular dv camera, so bear with me with my exposure)


Myspace commercial 1
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T5vpoU6KTts

Myspace commercial 2
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hKC-WNpzDsg

Myspace commercial 3
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v6SULypxXoQ

inVISIONit Studios commercial 1
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zMf-x4lcjM0


inVISIONit Studios commercial 2
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PjjYE-T8o4k

I think your writing is succinct and funny. Your timing in regard to how you pace and edit your scenes are okay. But you are right, you GOTTA work on that lighting and controlling the physical aspects and quality of your productions. That said, I watched them all and I REALLY liked the last two a lot.

Chris Watson
Watson MediaWorks

Very good and very funny!

Those were well done. You have a good mind for humour, they actually made me laugh out loud, something I rarely do when watching these types of videos. I agree you need to work on some lighting. But the last video looked great, although that was the only one I didn't understand. Great job.