if you would like to take a look.
you can download it here

www.danielrudd.com/media/starr-spir-dev-rough.wmv (39mb)

it's not the final draft so I'm open for suggestions.
I have about 8 spots that I want to clean up visually, and numerous places where the audio balance needs to be better.

But if anyone wants to take the time to watch and point out suggestions (can't really change actual content at this point)

BTW: This is also the project that "my friend" had the terrible audio problem with.

considering how bad it was, it came out OK.

Obviously it's compressed for web,
Daniel

Very nice, great job!

Mike

Daniel, that's very nice - thanks for sharing. Yes, you did a good job fixing that audio that "your friend" screwed up! What's your intended distribution format?

Very well done.

thanks for the kind words

It will be shown on a tour of their main campus (primarily)
It will be distributed in limited quantities on DVD (potential donors and friends of Starr)
It may also be featured on the web site.

It's not to late for constructive criticism. I still have a few days to tweak.