Would love some constructive criticism on this piece I'm working on. As you can tell, it isn't finished yet, but it's close. I was leaving the end of the video open as our men's soccer team was a #1 seed in the NCAA tournament and I was hoping they would win back to back national championships, but they got upset last week. So I'm transitioning to adding some more footage of fall activities (thanksgiving, pumpkin carving, etc) to end the video.

Would love your ideas and suggestions on the video as a whole and specific things you'd like to see changed.

Thanks!

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Fantastic work, Brock. I think it stands fine as is, save for the upcoming holiday shots you put in,

Thanks Gary!