Please view my latest entry into the "Bike Shorts" competition in Virginia, USA. Here's a link:

Kiss My Ashes Goodbye - YouTube

It won the "audience choice" award in this small film festival--only 13 entries. However, it recently was rejected in two other film competitions.

My question is: how do you shorten a film like this but still get the idea of the film across to the viewer.

P.S. Please view the entire film. There is a scene after the credits. (Would you have put the final scene BEFORE the credits.)

Thanks in advance for your constructive criticism.

I have put scenes after the credits in a couple of things. It is always a fail. YMMV