I am currently working on a video for a photographer and I was wondering if you all could give me a few pointers or suggestions for it. Below is what I have so far and I was wondering what you all thought of it. I obviously haven't purchased the music yet, but what do you think of the rest. Anywhere I can improve?

Erica Video Rough Cut #1 on Vimeo

Last wedding the photog asked me to do a promo for him as well, his main occupation was fashion photograpy so I'd be interested in some tips :) Nice video btw.

You did a superb job and she has a fresh eye. Nice to see work like that.

Very nice! What did you shoot with, and if you know, what lens was she using on her 5D?

Well I currently own a T3i and had planned on using it for the shoot, but she had two 5Dmarkiii's and let me use one, which i was extremely excited about!

She had an 85mm prime and a 35mm prime. Most of her photographs were with the 35. I used a combination of the 35, 85, 50 1.8, and 11-16 tokina