I'd like to share a short film about beauty of everyday life, falling leaves, and passing time

Location: Bory Tucholskie (Poland) Directed: mojebory
Edited: mojebory
Shot: mojebory
Color grading: mojebory
facebook.com/borytucholskie
Music: Sigur Rós

Step by Step | passing time on Vimeo

Mariusz,

There was some excellent framing, colour and angles in that film, but I have to say I really struggled with the continuity. To me, it just didn't flow in its present state. Its almost as if its a series of stills tied together to make a film. I couldn't work out how it tied in with passing time.

On the flip side, I loved some of the framing and colour.

Al

Hi Alan,

Thanks for your feedback... I did as I could... maybe next time ;)
Best wishes from Poland

I think the framing and colors are pretty good. :)
I think the story could be better told if some of the footages are rearranged to improve the continuity of the video.

Thank you for your feedback,

Maybe you didn't notice that almost every part of this film is an analogy... or maybe I did something wrong ;)

Greetings from Poland

Mariusz

Great work. One or the most pleasing pieces I have watched of late. Nice clear narrative, poetic, evocative; I enjoyed every bit of it. Just gorgeous. Congratulations.

Thanks so much for sharing.

Greetings to you from New Zealand.

John

Hi John,

thank you so much for watching ;)

Greetings from Poland